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The Sacrifice
Contributed by
rt239
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Wednesday, 31st December 2008 @ 10:15:21 AM in AEST
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One day God appeared to me
And told me some bad news
He said to sacrifice my son
And now I couldnt choose;
Should I sacrifice my son
And listen to the Lord?
Or should I keep him safe and sound
Not bring him to the sword?
We climbed up to the mountain top
And Isaac began to ask
Where is the lamb for us to kill
For this sacrificing task?
Then he said Daddy is it me?
That God wants to die?
Have I done something terribly wrong?
Please tell me have I?
I answered him; Im afraid youre right,
But you have not done wrong
I will be there to join you soon
My life will end before long.
I prepared the Altar
The blade in my hand
I could have backed down now
My unsteady hand
Waiting, Waiting
For God to say
You have proved faithful,
So stop, its ok!
I didnt have the guts to kill
Isaac my only son
I had to obey Gods word
His controlling love had won.
Suddenly a voice shone down
Gods voice in fact to say
Abraham, youve proved your faith
Stop now, its ok!
I never felt like that before
The greatest feeling on earth
I cried with joy rejoice he lives!
We laughed for all it was worth!
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Re: The Sacrifice
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 31st December 2008 @ 06:17:05 PM AEST
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| you brought the story out with good merit and good sense nice post i hope you got a good grade |
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Re: The Sacrifice
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by emystar on
Thursday, 1st January 2009 @ 02:37:04 AM AEST
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This is a fantastic write. At twelve you had and have great talent.
Keep up the awesome work.
Huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy |
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