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Array ( [sid] => 14713 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => New Beginning’s After Old Deaths [time] => 2003-03-22 05:35:00 [hometext] => This isn’t one of my poems. It’s my friends, but she doesn’t have a computer so I’m submitting it for her...hope u like it! [bodytext] => I got to where I want to end my life
so I can end my pain and strife
I wish that I could make you see
just how hard it is to be me
I hate my life, what can I say
I think about it everyday
everyday I try to live
everyday I try to give
each time I come closer to that knife
just so I can end my pain and strife
maybe one day
my pain will end
that’s the day my new life will begin [comments] => 4 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Percursors [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

New Beginning’s After Old Deaths

Contributed by Percursors on Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I got to where I want to end my life
so I can end my pain and strife
I wish that I could make you see
just how hard it is to be me
I hate my life, what can I say
I think about it everyday
everyday I try to live
everyday I try to give
each time I come closer to that knife
just so I can end my pain and strife
maybe one day
my pain will end
that’s the day my new life will begin

Copyright Â© Percursors ... [ 2003-03-22 05:35:00]
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Re: New Beginning’s After Old Deaths (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 11:18:42 AM AEST
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your friend writes good

Re: New Beginning’s After Old Deaths (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 11:50:31 AM AEST
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This is a really good poem...it's really sad...but i've been there too...I think we all have...loved it...and God bless xoxo

Re: New Beginning’s After Old Deaths (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 11:28:11 AM AEST
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This is a really good poem. I hope your friend decides to submit more poetry soon. I really liked it! Oh and tell her that i'm sure the skys will clear for her soon! *hugs*

Re: New Beginning’s After Old Deaths (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 02:13:47 PM AEST
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great write, i really enjoyed this.

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