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Array ( [sid] => 14689 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Opal Wray [time] => 2003-03-21 19:25:00 [hometext] => ** Here's yet another poem written about Opal Wray... This one is before Harvey came into her life... Enjoy ^^... ** [bodytext] => She walks down the endless hall
Her eyes a deep, somber, blue
Stained with tears of sorrow
Her heart is broken
Nothing left but an empty space

She is alone in life
With no one to love
Or to love her in return
Her detest for feelings and emotions
Flourishes with each day

She has been hurt too many times
Too many times to even keep count
She is beyond crying
Beyond feeling
Beyond pain

Betrayal is a natural occurrence
Sadness is her fuel for life
Anger burns the Joy within to nothing
It seems as though no one can save
Poor Opal Wray [comments] => 3 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 32 [informant] => undead_poet14 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Opal Wray

Contributed by undead_poet14 on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 07:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

She walks down the endless hall
Her eyes a deep, somber, blue
Stained with tears of sorrow
Her heart is broken
Nothing left but an empty space

She is alone in life
With no one to love
Or to love her in return
Her detest for feelings and emotions
Flourishes with each day

She has been hurt too many times
Too many times to even keep count
She is beyond crying
Beyond feeling
Beyond pain

Betrayal is a natural occurrence
Sadness is her fuel for life
Anger burns the Joy within to nothing
It seems as though no one can save
Poor Opal Wray

Copyright © undead_poet14 ... [ 2003-03-21 19:25:00]
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Re: Opal Wray (User Rating: 1 )
by ravenblack_phoenix on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 07:29:53 PM AEST
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Awww, poor Opal Wray =( Maybe she needs chocolate, chocolate usually helps ^.^ heheh....

Re: Opal Wray (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 09:50:01 PM AEST
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i agree chocolate helps alot. good write although very sad
Sharon

Re: Opal Wray (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 02:03:12 AM AEST
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I dont know who the hell Opal Wray is, but this was a very good poem i love the mood and the sadness u create.

Bobo (Joel)

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