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[aid] => mick
[title] => untitled
[time] => 2008-12-07 04:50:53
[hometext] => its not good but .. i need advice to improve.
[bodytext] => As she lays alone staring at the stars, She can hear her dads voices from above. A hallucination or a calling? He's looking down on her with his unconditional love. The thoughts that run through her mind, Fill her head with ideas, as she cuts even deeper Its wasnt her intention, although she thought If one day she was to going to cum face to face with the reaper. She tells everyone shes alright But inside her hearts almost shattered Everyone realises she not when, They open the bathroom door and there's blood scattered Love hurts . But losing someone close to you is even worse. Live every moment like its your last.! [comments] => 0 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 13 [informant] => bleedingSMILE [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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