|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Blood and Bricks
Contributed by
navydocny
on
Tuesday, 25th November 2008 @ 05:21:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
|
Mortar of dirt mixed with our blood
An unkempt garden which will not bud
Bricks ground of our bones, baked by the sun
Dying tree in the yard, whose life is undone
This broken home, which only we can see
Created with abandonment, and strife by me
How long it was held, and made yet to live
When I had nothing, but pain which to give
Still it endures, and lives still to suffer
From the torment reared, from this lowly duffer
To make amends, and to cheat against fate
And win back your love, even though its too late
All the chances youve given and all of them squandered
Had I known that I had them, and change, Ive pondered
I am worth more than that, all that has been taken
Ill offer you my vow, that wont be forsaken
Ill stand by your side, and follow things through
When I am told something, Ill only believe you
You have what youve sought, been here every day
One chance to let me love you, is all that I pray
Copyright ©
navydocny
... [
2008-11-25 05:21:03]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Blood and Bricks
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Wednesday, 26th November 2008 @ 12:11:08 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
So sad but beautifully written.
Hang tuff, my friend and stay safe.
big huggs, blessings,
emy |
|
|
Re: Blood and Bricks
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Friday, 28th November 2008 @ 02:34:04 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
beautifully heartfelt, blessings to you...
hugs n' love nessa |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
