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Array ( [sid] => 146216 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => 'Rents [time] => 2008-11-09 13:27:26 [hometext] => I wrote this out of anger for my parents. Its really rough, I didn't edit it. [bodytext] => I bet they're sitting up there
Laying down next to each other, thinking
Why does our daughter gotta be like this?
Why does our daughter gotta rebel like this?
I bet they're prayin to their Lord every night, askin
Please, lord, please help her get back on the right road
Please make her a perfect little angel
... How ironic.

Hey, I got a question for you, Dad
Do you regret the day I was born into this world?
That look upon your face, Dad
Its yellin at me
Screamin at me
Telling me, "you aint no daughter of mine."
Say it to my face, DAD!
Am I your biggest dissapointment?

How about you, Mother?
You look at me every single **** day
Sometimes your face is full of love
But mostly it looks like disgust mixed with a poison of blame and dissapointment
Maybe im just full of ****, but
Neither of you seem to want me around
(Wouldn't life be so much easier?)
Oh yeah, Mom, I know you love me
Everything I do wrong in life... you try to blame it on my friends
**** THAT!

Say it to my face
Im the worst kid you've ever had

Do you know how it feels to know you're the outcast in the family?
To know your parents are dissapointed in you constantly?
To know anything you ever try to do for them
It is, and never will, be enough?
You know what its like to have your parents never trust you?
Believe you?

You make claims against me - okay.
There's something wrong with how I am..?
Sorry Mom! That's just who I am.
Im done with this BS

You can stand there lecturing me
I'll look you in the eye, not taking in a word of what you say
I'll sit here until you're satisfied

With all that rage in your face
Would you like to take a hit, Dad?
With all that rage in your voice
Would you like to give me a slap, Mom?
I'll take it
I'll take it all
I don't care
You know it wouldn't help
But it would give me a better reason to leave
So go ahead!

Im sorry
Sorry I can't live up to your standards
Sorry I'm not good enough for you
Sorry you don't like me for me
Sorry I'm such a "problem child" [comments] => 2 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 6 [informant] => thelostpuppet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
'Rents

Contributed by thelostpuppet on Sunday, 9th November 2008 @ 01:27:26 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



I bet they're sitting up there
Laying down next to each other, thinking
Why does our daughter gotta be like this?
Why does our daughter gotta rebel like this?
I bet they're prayin to their Lord every night, askin
Please, lord, please help her get back on the right road
Please make her a perfect little angel
... How ironic.

Hey, I got a question for you, Dad
Do you regret the day I was born into this world?
That look upon your face, Dad
Its yellin at me
Screamin at me
Telling me, "you aint no daughter of mine."
Say it to my face, DAD!
Am I your biggest dissapointment?

How about you, Mother?
You look at me every single **** day
Sometimes your face is full of love
But mostly it looks like disgust mixed with a poison of blame and dissapointment
Maybe im just full of ****, but
Neither of you seem to want me around
(Wouldn't life be so much easier?)
Oh yeah, Mom, I know you love me
Everything I do wrong in life... you try to blame it on my friends
**** THAT!

Say it to my face
Im the worst kid you've ever had

Do you know how it feels to know you're the outcast in the family?
To know your parents are dissapointed in you constantly?
To know anything you ever try to do for them
It is, and never will, be enough?
You know what its like to have your parents never trust you?
Believe you?

You make claims against me - okay.
There's something wrong with how I am..?
Sorry Mom! That's just who I am.
Im done with this BS

You can stand there lecturing me
I'll look you in the eye, not taking in a word of what you say
I'll sit here until you're satisfied

With all that rage in your face
Would you like to take a hit, Dad?
With all that rage in your voice
Would you like to give me a slap, Mom?
I'll take it
I'll take it all
I don't care
You know it wouldn't help
But it would give me a better reason to leave
So go ahead!

Im sorry
Sorry I can't live up to your standards
Sorry I'm not good enough for you
Sorry you don't like me for me
Sorry I'm such a "problem child"




Copyright © thelostpuppet ... [ 2008-11-09 13:27:26]
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Re: 'Rents (User Rating: 1 )
by MsCommunicati0n on Sunday, 9th November 2008 @ 09:25:10 PM AEST
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Love the emotion


Re: 'Rents (User Rating: 1 )
by jenniferstein2006 on Sunday, 9th November 2008 @ 10:42:58 PM AEST
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i can soooo relate to this
very good!




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