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She'd Never Done That Before..
Contributed by
amber_vonHorror
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Thursday, 9th October 2008 @ 04:04:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
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well once upon a time i used to gaze at her for hours
admiring this beauty, unique to every bone structure
and her voice, like a melody hidden beneath peaches skin
but this was where her problems soon begin
and one day she wiped her eyes, red from crying
she'd never done that before
and i held out my hand, 'my eyes are just sore'
she laughed it off
but her laughter had no soul
and once she burnt her self with her cigarette
but they glitered like diamonds
against every soft curve
and every word that passed through her lips
was dipped in sweet serenity
the voice of angel, yet to fall
then oneday her legs looked bruised
and she covered them up
she'd never doen that before
they looked so swollen, so sore
and then one day
the glow behind her eyes dissappeared
every bloodstream had been drained
she had no innocence left in her face
she bled nothing
and thats what she became
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Re: She'd Never Done That Before..
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by karoody on
Thursday, 9th October 2008 @ 06:34:41 AM AEST
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great write...very visual, kept me interested...i felt like this girl was actually someone i knew
thank you
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