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If I ask too much of you let me go
If I’m not good enough for you let me go
If I’m not what you need let me go
If I stress you out let me go
If you think I use you let me go
If you want better then let me go
I’m so tired of trying and failing
Everything I do you complain about it
I’m using you
I’m cheating on you
I’m taking advantage of you
I don’t do this I don’t do that
What do you want from me!!!!
I thought I was doing just as much as you do for me for you
But I guess I was wrong!?!!?!
Because you’re always mad at me or ignoring me
I know you’re always right and I’m always wrong and that’s how it will always be!!!
What do you want me to do kiss your butt but why when you don’t even kiss mine
I love you with all my heart but I don’t think I’ll ever be good enough for you!!!!
All I want is for you to be happy and it doesn’t seem like it’s with me then you NEED to let me GO!!!!!!
I don’t feel you even need me in your life but I need you so bad!!!
But you can’t even see that
You’re so blind I don’t even think you see that I care so much about you or you don’t even care to see it!
Because you’re so stuck on me hurting you but that’s the last thing I would ever want to do to the love of my life!!
Sometimes I hate myself more because you’re so freaking mad at me and I set there trying to see what I did wrong!
I’m so hurt you can’t see how much I want you in my life!!!
But I feel I just ***** you off and make you hate me more but I can’t change so just let me go!!!
You don’t have to worry about hurting me I’ve been hurt and let down my whole ***** life by the ones I LOVE!!!
I guess I deserve it right?
I guess my mom was right no one will ever love me or even care for me!!
I’m just a big waste of your time!!
JUST LET ME GOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I’m not even worth your time
Sometimes I feel I’m just in your way and I’m just bringing you down
YOU’D BE BETTER OFF WITH OUT ME!!!
JUST LET ME GOOOO!!!!!!
Yeah it’s killing me inside to write this cause it’s so hurt to hear the TRUTH!!!!
My dad always said that the truth hurts but I didn’t think it hurt this much!!!!!
I was fooling myself now I’m sitting here wondering why your with me
WHAT the ***** do I have that no other girl has!?!
You could have someone skinny, SMART
SOMEONE that would help you and help better you
SOMEONE that has a good body and face (FOR REAL)
SOMEONE that will do all you need like clean all the time
SOMEONE you really think is sexy!!!
I don’t know what you want but I will NEVER STOP loving YOU!!!!!
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I'm always in the wrong!!!!

Contributed by roxie on Thursday, 9th October 2008 @ 02:16:43 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



If you don’t want me let me go
If I ask too much of you let me go
If I’m not good enough for you let me go
If I’m not what you need let me go
If I stress you out let me go
If you think I use you let me go
If you want better then let me go
I’m so tired of trying and failing
Everything I do you complain about it
I’m using you
I’m cheating on you
I’m taking advantage of you
I don’t do this I don’t do that
What do you want from me!!!!
I thought I was doing just as much as you do for me for you
But I guess I was wrong!?!!?!
Because you’re always mad at me or ignoring me
I know you’re always right and I’m always wrong and that’s how it will always be!!!
What do you want me to do kiss your butt but why when you don’t even kiss mine
I love you with all my heart but I don’t think I’ll ever be good enough for you!!!!
All I want is for you to be happy and it doesn’t seem like it’s with me then you NEED to let me GO!!!!!!
I don’t feel you even need me in your life but I need you so bad!!!
But you can’t even see that
You’re so blind I don’t even think you see that I care so much about you or you don’t even care to see it!
Because you’re so stuck on me hurting you but that’s the last thing I would ever want to do to the love of my life!!
Sometimes I hate myself more because you’re so freaking mad at me and I set there trying to see what I did wrong!
I’m so hurt you can’t see how much I want you in my life!!!
But I feel I just ***** you off and make you hate me more but I can’t change so just let me go!!!
You don’t have to worry about hurting me I’ve been hurt and let down my whole ***** life by the ones I LOVE!!!
I guess I deserve it right?
I guess my mom was right no one will ever love me or even care for me!!
I’m just a big waste of your time!!
JUST LET ME GOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I’m not even worth your time
Sometimes I feel I’m just in your way and I’m just bringing you down
YOU’D BE BETTER OFF WITH OUT ME!!!
JUST LET ME GOOOO!!!!!!
Yeah it’s killing me inside to write this cause it’s so hurt to hear the TRUTH!!!!
My dad always said that the truth hurts but I didn’t think it hurt this much!!!!!
I was fooling myself now I’m sitting here wondering why your with me
WHAT the ***** do I have that no other girl has!?!
You could have someone skinny, SMART
SOMEONE that would help you and help better you
SOMEONE that has a good body and face (FOR REAL)
SOMEONE that will do all you need like clean all the time
SOMEONE you really think is sexy!!!
I don’t know what you want but I will NEVER STOP loving YOU!!!!!




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Re: I'm always in the wrong!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Thursday, 9th October 2008 @ 02:27:35 AM AEST
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wow, there was so much emotion in this, i almost felt like i wasn't supposed to be hearing this...it is obvious that you are truely hurting and i hate that, i really do...blessings to you....welcome to the site as well...hope to see better days for you
kara


Re: I'm always in the wrong!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 9th October 2008 @ 03:54:23 AM AEST
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Psycology would tell you that he does all that to feel good about himself.
From experience I would say they are right.
It took me 8 years too get it right.
Now i will run from the type. Nothing we can do to change them, some never get over it, only god knows for sure.
The reason it took me 8 years is to find my self again. It worked for me and I've learned much about the experience and now I can move on. I have moved on. I realized after that so called marraige that I had jumped out of the frying pan into the fire, I said to my self,
"Not the right thing to do". I'd lived thru too much to go out again.
Any ways just go and be strong cause there is a light at the end of the tunnel and it was worth the wait. the reason I say this is cause I've been there done that.
take care of yourself as you are the good person but they would probable never ever admit it to you.
I wish you luv in all you do. Luv yourself cause God don't make no junk.
Huggs, prayer, wisdom, strength, courage, peace,
emy


Re: I'm always in the wrong!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by twick on Thursday, 9th October 2008 @ 05:10:03 AM AEST
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One of my best friends is going through almost exactly the same thing but can't seem to say it to her boyfriend.

I'm going to read her this in hopes it inspires her own voice!

Thanks! this was the perfect poem at the perfect time.


Re: I'm always in the wrong!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 9th October 2008 @ 12:26:12 PM AEST
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You really have wrung out every last drop of emotion in this one.
It never lets up it's intensity from start to finish.
Nice write

Steve


Re: I'm always in the wrong!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 13th October 2008 @ 07:26:01 PM AEST
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"I guess my mom was right no one will ever love me or even care for me!!"
I find this very heart-breaking..that a Mother could say this to her child..or any child for that matter.
This write is so full of emotions... Hope things get better for you...
Hugs
Jenni




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