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Array ( [sid] => 145590 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => goodbye baby [time] => 2008-10-08 15:27:16 [hometext] => i think that any mother who has lost a child or miscarried a baby can identify with this poem [bodytext] => A TINY WISPER
and no goodbye
My heart it aches
It bleeds it cry's

Why did you have to
leave me why did you
go away
I feel so tourched
almost eveyday

My life its torn its empty
Im breaking up inside
And all these tears are welling
up I just cannot hide

To touch your face
to hold your hands
or just to feel you near
would have been so better
good than nothing i do fear

I always think about you
eventhough times gone by
I wonder what you may look like
and it still makes me cry

I never got to name you
or feel you're embrace or to wipe away
your sorrows when tears rolled down your
face

I tried to think what i could've done
just to make you stay to watch you grow before me
to lauch and sing and play

But god had different plans for you
in heaven up above and a part of me it died that day
when he took you away my love

Are you happy where you are?
i wish you could have stayed
But your memory will always be
locked in my heart and it will never go away.

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goodbye baby

Contributed by leannabanana on Wednesday, 8th October 2008 @ 03:27:16 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



A TINY WISPER
and no goodbye
My heart it aches
It bleeds it cry's

Why did you have to
leave me why did you
go away
I feel so tourched
almost eveyday

My life its torn its empty
Im breaking up inside
And all these tears are welling
up I just cannot hide

To touch your face
to hold your hands
or just to feel you near
would have been so better
good than nothing i do fear

I always think about you
eventhough times gone by
I wonder what you may look like
and it still makes me cry

I never got to name you
or feel you're embrace or to wipe away
your sorrows when tears rolled down your
face

I tried to think what i could've done
just to make you stay to watch you grow before me
to lauch and sing and play

But god had different plans for you
in heaven up above and a part of me it died that day
when he took you away my love

Are you happy where you are?
i wish you could have stayed
But your memory will always be
locked in my heart and it will never go away.





Copyright © leannabanana ... [ 2008-10-08 15:27:16]
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Re: goodbye baby (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 8th October 2008 @ 08:29:46 PM AEST
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I am so sorry this happened to you.
There is nothing worse than this pain.
This just broke my heart. No words will do this heart breaking write justice. So sorry for this pain.

Michelle


Re: goodbye baby (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 8th October 2008 @ 09:50:53 PM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
I know the feelings and I'm so soory for you.
Luv, huggs, prayer, peace,
emy


Re: goodbye baby (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 8th October 2008 @ 10:42:01 PM AEST
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I am terribly sorry for your loss.. I can truly understand what you're going through. The pain never goes away. It may get easier at times but always surfaces....
Hugs and prayers...
Jenni


Re: goodbye baby (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Thursday, 9th October 2008 @ 12:43:34 AM AEST
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i hate that your heart has to know this pain. it's not an easy road for you i am sure. i have walked my own story, but we all bear our troubles differently. i hope that you are able to find comfort in your heart somehow. there are many wonderful ladies here who have helped me through many tears. we are always ready to listen...
best of my blessings
kara


Re: goodbye baby (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 9th October 2008 @ 12:46:16 PM AEST
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It was because of the fact that I had just posted a poem about cot death that I felt compelled to read yours.
I was moved by what you wrote, the depth of emotion seeps from your heart onto the page

Steve


Re: goodbye baby (User Rating: 1 )
by Saaaraxxx16 on Thursday, 9th October 2008 @ 07:04:01 PM AEST
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its said that even though pain is horrible, some beauty comes from it. This poem is truely inspiring, my mom had a miscarrige, and it really does hurt. I couldnt fathom understanding how it must have felt for you. Losing something so close to your heart is so very painful. Beautiful write, i hope you find your inner peace..
sending my love, Saraa.




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