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Array ( [sid] => 14521 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => As You Were [time] => 2003-03-19 00:05:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The day you caught my eye
Like a lone star in the sky
I didn't know what it was
It was so innocent
Who would have known
It was like having heaven sent

The days we'd go for a walk
Or just sit down and talk
It took me to another place
It was just you
And I alone together
All things felt so true

On the day you said "I love you"
I was raised above the few
My life, it had meaning
It had a name
For I knew Emily
I knew I'd never be the same

The day came when I needed you
I was lost in a sea of blue
I ventured into your space
For your loving touch
And your tenderness
I realized then, I had asked too much

I feared my days were in number
I had no peace, I had no slumber
I broke the rules
That part of heaven
You had given
All was lost, the day of 11/11

I know one day you'll walk by
I hope you won’t see me, you won't say, "Hi"
You say you haven't changed
That may be true
But to me you have
And I don't want to stop loving you
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 263 [topic] => 22 [informant] => ThirtyDays [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
As You Were

Contributed by ThirtyDays on Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



The day you caught my eye
Like a lone star in the sky
I didn't know what it was
It was so innocent
Who would have known
It was like having heaven sent

The days we'd go for a walk
Or just sit down and talk
It took me to another place
It was just you
And I alone together
All things felt so true

On the day you said "I love you"
I was raised above the few
My life, it had meaning
It had a name
For I knew Emily
I knew I'd never be the same

The day came when I needed you
I was lost in a sea of blue
I ventured into your space
For your loving touch
And your tenderness
I realized then, I had asked too much

I feared my days were in number
I had no peace, I had no slumber
I broke the rules
That part of heaven
You had given
All was lost, the day of 11/11

I know one day you'll walk by
I hope you won’t see me, you won't say, "Hi"
You say you haven't changed
That may be true
But to me you have
And I don't want to stop loving you




Copyright © ThirtyDays ... [ 2003-03-19 00:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: As You Were (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 03:47:13 AM AEST
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oh, this is so sad... i am sorry for your heartbreak... i hope things get better... blessings...


Re: As You Were (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 03:43:00 PM AEST
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this is such a good poem, a story well told and feelings honestly expressed, i'm sure life will turn around for you




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