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Eyes that laugh, and hearts that plea
Their innocent voices, pleach my dream
Our children’s gambol, chaste and agleam
She and them, plaited as whole
Together with them, my heart will toll
Hers is the love that binds us all
Mine is the desire, despite my fall
The love of four, would it be plenteous
Of five, it would be, that much more bounteous

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Five

Contributed by navydocny on Sunday, 14th September 2008 @ 11:12:14 AM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

A musician, a dancer, a scholar, all three
Eyes that laugh, and hearts that plea
Their innocent voices, pleach my dream
Our children’s gambol, chaste and agleam
She and them, plaited as whole
Together with them, my heart will toll
Hers is the love that binds us all
Mine is the desire, despite my fall
The love of four, would it be plenteous
Of five, it would be, that much more bounteous

Copyright Â© navydocny ... [ 2008-09-14 11:12:14]
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Re: Five (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Sunday, 14th September 2008 @ 11:34:19 AM AEST
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it's beautiful how you adore them...the anticipation would be keeping me so antsy...don't know how you do it...
thanks for sharing
kara

Re: Five (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 14th September 2008 @ 12:23:15 PM AEST
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This is so sweet, Steve.. I hope you guys have a great time together....
Jenni

Re: Five (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 09:46:28 AM AEST
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Steve, this is so heartfelt and beautiful. The happy bus indeed!!
You hold onto all you've shared in this poem. Dreams are just wishes
that are waiting to come true. :) All my hopes and prayers are
with you. And for when you get back to the West,

WELCOME HOME!!

~ Breezy

Re: Five (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 16th September 2008 @ 10:12:28 AM AEST
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im so excited for you, i feel like im going on a trip lol! when you get home have fun fun fun!! and eat everything in sight, i know you guys miss out on so much we take for granted... thanx for doing what you do:)

hugs n' love nessa

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