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[aid] => mick
[title] => Untitled
[time] => 2008-09-12 17:21:49
[hometext] => *in the works still(ish)*This is romance poem that is semi errotic. I wrote this as part of a series of poems for my boyfriend. How is it? Constructive critisism is appriciated.
[bodytext] => If I close my eyes I feel your gentle mouth Caressing my cheek Slowly you search Our lips crush together silken flowers Pressed in my summer diary Love and instinct Form a double helix Entwining, Blurring Beyond distinction It’s because we’re us And that makes it right. At the base of my throat Your lips smoulder Embossing my skin With the signature tingle Of blue flames, blue eyes Fire shouldn’t feel so incredible. My heart beats In cut time Anticipating Then you descend Coaxing a melodic sound From finely tuned heartstrings You hold the note And I know and trust How you handle the dynamics How you draw out my silent fermata The fire courses through me Licks my writhing torso The epicentre of desire Your burning kiss [comments] => 1 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 2 [informant] => dev_erz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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