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Array ( [sid] => 144963 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Creature From My Nightmare. [time] => 2008-09-06 04:54:49 [hometext] => Don't fear your true self. [bodytext] => ..Máni..

Hello there, Creature From My Nightmare.
Are you here to join me in this night of tranquillity?
You are truly welcome, Creature From My Nightmare.

..Tyr..

I see you here once again, Creature From My Nightmare.
Have you come to witness this night of unconsciousness?
You are truly welcome, Creature From My Nightmare.

..Woden..

Tonight I expect your arrival, Creature From My Nightmare.
Will you come to neglect my fears on this uneventful night?
You are truly welcome, Creature From My Nightmare.

..Thor..

I have wished for your arrival, Creature From My Nightmare.
Will you come tonight, to silence my thoughts of solitude?
You are truly welcome, Creature From My Nightmare.

..Freyja..

I no longer await your arrival, Creature From My Nightmare.
You never came to darken my eyes, in this sickening morning glow.
You are no longer welcome, Creature From My Nightmare. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 304 [topic] => 60 [informant] => miseria [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => insomniac )

Creature From My Nightmare.

Contributed by miseria on Saturday, 6th September 2008 @ 04:54:49 AM in AEST
Topic: insomniac

..Máni..

Hello there, Creature From My Nightmare.
Are you here to join me in this night of tranquillity?
You are truly welcome, Creature From My Nightmare.

..Tyr..

I see you here once again, Creature From My Nightmare.
Have you come to witness this night of unconsciousness?
You are truly welcome, Creature From My Nightmare.

..Woden..

Tonight I expect your arrival, Creature From My Nightmare.
Will you come to neglect my fears on this uneventful night?
You are truly welcome, Creature From My Nightmare.

..Thor..

I have wished for your arrival, Creature From My Nightmare.
Will you come tonight, to silence my thoughts of solitude?
You are truly welcome, Creature From My Nightmare.

..Freyja..

I no longer await your arrival, Creature From My Nightmare.
You never came to darken my eyes, in this sickening morning glow.
You are no longer welcome, Creature From My Nightmare.

Copyright Â© miseria ... [ 2008-09-06 04:54:49]
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Re: Creature From My Nightmare. (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Saturday, 6th September 2008 @ 07:51:24 AM AEST
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i fear nothing,,,at darkness,,nor day light,,
only one do i fear,,well written ,,
a friend in words,,,spooky

Re: Creature From My Nightmare. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 6th September 2008 @ 04:02:36 PM AEST
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For some reason the phrase "Creature From My Nightmare" stood out to me in this one.

Okay, so this is me doing exactly what I said I would never do to another poet....

This had a ton of potential. It's creative and formatted with an original flare. I can't believe I am saying this to someone. The repetition would have worked if it weren't repeated with only one line separating it.

I know it's your poem and I am sorry that I am suggesting that you change something about your poem. I really am. I hate doing this. I have never done this. I deeply apologize but I wrote something once with the same annoying repetition in almost the same way. Looking at it now this was a disastrous attempt. Your poem would've been ten times more powerful had you not repeated that phrase with such little buffer.

I am sorry just my opinion and perhaps I shouldn't have given it but I am not practicing a lot of discretion these days.

Keep Writing!

SCM

Re: Creature From My Nightmare. (User Rating: 1 )
by maggot on Monday, 8th September 2008 @ 02:10:13 PM AEST
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hey good write. loved the phrase creature from my nightmare

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