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Will never be restored.
Those endless nights-
Pacing back and forth.

For my fate is not at my will,
And this heart my never heal...

I shall get my vengeance, someday.
then,you too,will fade away. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 363 [topic] => 6 [informant] => AchingSoul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

You'll get what you deserve.

Contributed by AchingSoul on Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 03:57:23 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

The time you took away from me-
Will never be restored.
Those endless nights-
Pacing back and forth.

For my fate is not at my will,
And this heart my never heal...

I shall get my vengeance, someday.
then,you too,will fade away.

Copyright © AchingSoul ... [ 2008-08-28 03:57:23]
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Re: You'll get what you deserve. (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 06:31:31 AM AEST
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vengeance only opens old wounds, and love is never enough...

let it go ^_^

always, abraham

Re: You'll get what you deserve. (User Rating: 1 )
by allforyou on Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 09:10:30 AM AEST
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i know what you mean. its like damn--all that time, wasted. All that pointless frustration. But do know, it feels much better to let go than to get even.

keep writing,
kara

Re: You'll get what you deserve. (User Rating: 1 )
by Saaaraxxx16 on Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 10:34:53 AM AEST
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dayumn. that boy better watch his back. =] great write.. and i hope your heart heals fast =)

Re: You'll get what you deserve. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 29th August 2008 @ 09:55:42 AM AEST
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ooooooooooo .. I am completely and TOTALLY in love
with that last line!! Exemplary!!!!

It is often quite hard to put into words what happens when
we are spurned or jilted or let down, or however we want
to describe what happens when we part with love, (for
whatEVER reason). But you have done, in very few lines
an outstanding job of expressing just that! I applaud your
seemingly effortless work! Exceptional!!

~ Breezy

Re: You'll get what you deserve. (User Rating: 1 )
by tres_estrellas on Monday, 17th November 2008 @ 06:34:36 AM AEST
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I can relate to this. I really like your work. Can't wait to see more!

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