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Array ( [sid] => 14468 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Sea Of Despair [time] => 2003-03-18 05:05:00 [hometext] => This is a poem I wrote just before I got divorced and it is how I felt about my life with my EX-Husband. That is way I got divorced.

But all is well now I have a new man in my life
he is very good to me I never knew it could
be like this between a man and a woman! [bodytext] =>
Sea Of Despair

I'm drifting no drowning in my sea of despair.
My heads above water but barely its there.
I'm looking towards heaven to see if he hears my plea, for a hand to throw me a line and save me.

My plea is not answered or maybe not heard, oh where might he be too busy with women just as desperate as me?

I'm sinking I sunk down deep deep below my life is now over as it swallows me hole.
No one to hear my plea of despair no one to care.

My life can't be over I struggle and fight to desperately reach the air and the light.

Alone I'm not for a hand does appear to save my life from this sea of despair.

By:

Mary Ann Holley ( Mistyskies) [comments] => 2 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Mistyskies [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Sea Of Despair

Contributed by Mistyskies on Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Sea Of Despair

I'm drifting no drowning in my sea of despair.
My heads above water but barely its there.
I'm looking towards heaven to see if he hears my plea, for a hand to throw me a line and save me.

My plea is not answered or maybe not heard, oh where might he be too busy with women just as desperate as me?

I'm sinking I sunk down deep deep below my life is now over as it swallows me hole.
No one to hear my plea of despair no one to care.

My life can't be over I struggle and fight to desperately reach the air and the light.

Alone I'm not for a hand does appear to save my life from this sea of despair.

By:

Mary Ann Holley ( Mistyskies)

Copyright © Mistyskies ... [ 2003-03-18 05:05:00]
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Re: Sea Of Despair (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 11:02:07 AM AEST
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What an incredible talent you have. It is amazing how such beautiful words can be created from such desperate emotions.

I am glad life is better for you now :))

sleepless_siren

Re: Sea Of Despair (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 09:55:16 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, Mary... This is such a good write..you have expressed the despair so well... (and if you don't mind me saying so, with a little bit of editing, I'd say it was a GREAT poem).... Superb imagery!!
Jenni

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