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I long for my dreams to be real
But only this nightmare of life
Can ever be a reality

The sorrow holds sway over my heart
As I wait for the moon
Longing to remain where I cannot be seen
I escape to another world

My only comfort is here
Where the notes flow through me
My only joy is found
In this one violin

I soar far above the ground
To touch the stars
I don’t want to ever come down
I dance upon the clouds

A smile comes across my face
It’s been a long time
But I found some joy today
In my own little place

I just wish I could stay here
Forever
Where I’ll never be hurt again
Ever

*** "the violin" is any song by Jean-Luc Ponty (he plays an electric violin) and he's my favorite musician*** [comments] => 3 [counter] => 228 [topic] => 40 [informant] => muinanyere [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )

This One Violin

Contributed by muinanyere on Monday, 4th August 2008 @ 02:45:32 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

In the shadows of deepest night
I long for my dreams to be real
But only this nightmare of life
Can ever be a reality

The sorrow holds sway over my heart
As I wait for the moon
Longing to remain where I cannot be seen
I escape to another world

My only comfort is here
Where the notes flow through me
My only joy is found
In this one violin

I soar far above the ground
To touch the stars
I don’t want to ever come down
I dance upon the clouds

A smile comes across my face
It’s been a long time
But I found some joy today
In my own little place

I just wish I could stay here
Forever
Where I’ll never be hurt again
Ever

*** "the violin" is any song by Jean-Luc Ponty (he plays an electric violin) and he's my favorite musician***

Copyright Â© muinanyere ... [ 2008-08-04 14:45:32]
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Re: This One Violin (User Rating: 1 )
by wheels on Monday, 4th August 2008 @ 04:49:28 PM AEST
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I can truly see the moment. I completly understand the feel yourself soaring within the musing of a song when all else around us seems dark and with out heart. The power with which it can both cast us up into a smile yet fill us with a sorrow nowing it shall not last and the notes shall wane and leave us in our din.

well written

--kevin
The lonely vagbond

Re: This One Violin (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Friday, 8th August 2008 @ 06:19:02 AM AEST
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Beautiful solitude.

Hoping all is well.

Deadwriter

Re: This One Violin (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 8th August 2008 @ 07:17:41 PM AEST
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A Masterpeice of reality, each word a poetic

obligato composed and conducted, by the

heart . . .

thank you likewise for your read.

Ben

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