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Array ( [sid] => 144297 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Silent breathing [time] => 2008-08-01 10:22:40 [hometext] => a bit out there........ [bodytext] => Innocence lost by the man
who takes everything.
The one who lays in wait
who covers his nest
and plays to the world
with haughty airs
fooling the fools
no glitter no gold.

His soul is owned by the devil.

Dirty little secrets
keepers of time
dead walkin
nobody talkin
expensive secrets
do not play regrets keepers now
shame on you, you are dirty.

Day of justice
it may be swift
you fear hell
you will live it
keeping your stone heart alive
with silent breathing. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 43 [informant] => shelby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Silent breathing

Contributed by shelby on Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 10:22:40 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Innocence lost by the man
who takes everything.
The one who lays in wait
who covers his nest
and plays to the world
with haughty airs
fooling the fools
no glitter no gold.

His soul is owned by the devil.

Dirty little secrets
keepers of time
dead walkin
nobody talkin
expensive secrets
do not play regrets keepers now
shame on you, you are dirty.

Day of justice
it may be swift
you fear hell
you will live it
keeping your stone heart alive
with silent breathing.




Copyright © shelby ... [ 2008-08-01 10:22:40]
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Re: Silent breathing (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 10:26:05 AM AEST
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cool write

Shari


Re: Silent breathing (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 10:26:47 AM AEST
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woo-hoo..this is cool..out there huh? just wait I`ll post ..."out there. lol good write my friend. Crow


Re: Silent breathing (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 11:13:18 AM AEST
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wow this is deeply dark and yet powerful at the same time.. it has alot of interesting twists and turns.. I love it

rock on,

vampyress Jenni


Re: Silent breathing (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 12:46:02 PM AEST
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It's definently different but awesome writing.
huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: Silent breathing (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 10:18:54 PM AEST
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It is a different type of write for you...and I agree alot of twists and turns...very cool...

Rich


Re: Silent breathing (User Rating: 1 )
by Personifyinthepoeticdream on Saturday, 2nd August 2008 @ 09:23:59 PM AEST
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nice




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