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Array ( [sid] => 144239 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Loathing and Desire [time] => 2008-07-29 14:21:03 [hometext] => i use 'god damn' in this poem. not sure if it's allowed. sorry if it's not [bodytext] => I stare at you
You're so guarded
Fake
Facinating
How is you mask so sturdy?
When lust may slip through mine
You disgust me
You appall me
You fascinate me
What's inside your head?
Beneath your mask?
Your kinks? Your fetishes?
Your dirty little secrets?
What resides behind your shield?
What fascinates me so?
Discusts me?
Apalls me?
Draws me?
What makes you so fake, yet so real?
So flawed, yet so perfect?
So plain, yet so god damn desirable?
I look at you and despise you
I loathe you
I desire you
You will be mine [comments] => 5 [counter] => 339 [topic] => 76 [informant] => KismetsPoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => obsession )

Loathing and Desire

Contributed by KismetsPoet on Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 02:21:03 PM in AEST
Topic: obsession

I stare at you
You're so guarded
Fake
Facinating
How is you mask so sturdy?
When lust may slip through mine
You disgust me
You appall me
You fascinate me
What's inside your head?
Beneath your mask?
Your kinks? Your fetishes?
Your dirty little secrets?
What resides behind your shield?
What fascinates me so?
Discusts me?
Apalls me?
Draws me?
What makes you so fake, yet so real?
So flawed, yet so perfect?
So plain, yet so god damn desirable?
I look at you and despise you
I loathe you
I desire you
You will be mine

Copyright © KismetsPoet ... [ 2008-07-29 14:21:03]
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Re: Loathing and Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 03:03:57 PM AEST
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creepy but in a good way. this is the type of poem that can give you chills. the only thing i would change is i would stop at the line "I desire you". all in all a great poem.

Re: Loathing and Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by LifeFadingAway on Wednesday, 30th July 2008 @ 09:39:36 AM AEST
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Great write!

Re: Loathing and Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 30th July 2008 @ 03:12:50 PM AEST
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very interesting....... you ask some good questions in this write interesting indeed. yes it could give a person a few chills the ending you will be mine.........
almost like this person is someone you cant have?
or shouldnt maybe?

Michelle

Re: Loathing and Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by LauraMary on Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 06:25:36 AM AEST
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This is brilliant.
I loved how I almost can imagine every word as a story in my head.
Fantastic.

Re: Loathing and Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by HaleysHeresat on Thursday, 30th October 2008 @ 10:07:44 PM AEST
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The title of your poem framed what I feel for someone, and reading it, all I did was connect. I enjoyed reading this; and I agree with the other people--really gives a person colossal chills.

thanks,
HaleysHeresat

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