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[aid] => mick
[title] => Dinarzad
[time] => 2002-07-30 10:16:56
[hometext] => This poem is a tribute to Dinarzad, the sister of Shahrazad in the tale 1001 arabian nights. As part of the plan to keep her sister alive, dinarzad had to spend 1001 nights sleeping underneath the bed where the tyrant king slept with her only sister. This poem is not quite finished though. I can tell it still needs a bit of fine tuning, so please let me know what you think i can do to make it better.
[bodytext] => Nearly three years of your life
were spent in that room, where you slept beneath the bed, and listened in awe to the tales that Shahrazad spun above. You lied there in silence, trying to sleep, while porcine grunts of a brutish monarch dominating his one-night bride pounded away at your ears. Then, when the devilish woman-hater had thoroughly violated her with his undiscerning lust, you held your strength hid your sympathy as you heart sank eternally lower every night. From there, you crawled out of your cell and asked her for the rest of last night's fable, according to the plan that had been in place from the start. This whole time, you made no persoanl gains, and drifted through your life with the sole reason of your existence being to ask the queen for the rest of last night's fable. And so it went, for nearly three years, you lied there in silence, trying to sleep, and died every night while you tried to ignore the horrid pig sex going on two feet above your head, all for the love of a sister. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 38 [informant] => Butterat_Zool [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Tributes )
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