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my mind numb to thinking of what the future holds
I only see a firey Hell
Chaining me to a wall with no voice to call out
breathing all the toxins of bitterness in
I realize .. I'm Lost without you here

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A slave in the soul

Contributed by Phantomvampyress on Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 06:14:34 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

My soul has dried up from feelings
my mind numb to thinking of what the future holds
I only see a firey Hell
Chaining me to a wall with no voice to call out
breathing all the toxins of bitterness in
I realize .. I'm Lost without you here

*Vampyress Jenni*

Copyright © Phantomvampyress ... [ 2008-07-14 06:14:34]
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Re: A slave in the soul (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 06:16:27 AM AEST
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nice job... glad you're writing again, hopefully this will "kick start" your pen and you'll be posting more,

wiz

Re: A slave in the soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 08:00:42 AM AEST
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So much said in so few words... This is a remarkable write....I hope to see more from you soon..
Hugs
Jenni

Re: A slave in the soul (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 12:56:00 AM AEST
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Like the flow of this

Re: A slave in the soul (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 03:42:07 AM AEST
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Haunting write Jen, it is hard to feel this way hope you will be ok.

I think you potrayed a brilliant write in few words it smacks one right in the heart sweety.

Hugs

ps was nice to hear from you

Michelle

Re: A slave in the soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 03:43:50 PM AEST
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A sad but beautiful write, ne're the less Jenn,

nice to read your little masterpeices once

again, take care my friend . . .

Ben

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