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Array ( [sid] => 14385 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Longing to Breathe [time] => 2003-03-17 05:30:00 [hometext] => For Jason. [bodytext] => You've turned me inside out,
My heart on my sleeve,
I love you so deeply, without you it's hard to breathe...

Without you...
A longing to be whole,
To hide from all the pain,
To savor the sweet taste of your soul...
A longing to stay in your arms,
To lay there for eternity,
All your love, your heart, your charms...
I'll love you to infinity if you let me.

Because you are my breath,
My love,
My hope,
Nested into the very depths of my soul...
You drive me wild,
Floating on this cloud,
Kiss away my tears,
And all the while I looked to others when the answer was here, now.

And I long for the words to tell you,
But they fumble through my mind,
Lost, they scatter,
And my mind will not rest, nor will time...
I must breathe. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 2 [informant] => ravenblack_phoenix [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Longing to Breathe

Contributed by ravenblack_phoenix on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 05:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



You've turned me inside out,
My heart on my sleeve,
I love you so deeply, without you it's hard to breathe...

Without you...
A longing to be whole,
To hide from all the pain,
To savor the sweet taste of your soul...
A longing to stay in your arms,
To lay there for eternity,
All your love, your heart, your charms...
I'll love you to infinity if you let me.

Because you are my breath,
My love,
My hope,
Nested into the very depths of my soul...
You drive me wild,
Floating on this cloud,
Kiss away my tears,
And all the while I looked to others when the answer was here, now.

And I long for the words to tell you,
But they fumble through my mind,
Lost, they scatter,
And my mind will not rest, nor will time...
I must breathe.




Copyright © ravenblack_phoenix ... [ 2003-03-17 05:30:00]
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Re: Longing to Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 05:34:38 AM AEST
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Love this ... gorgeous .. can relate and feel myself get swept along with your words .. beautiful ... Jan


Re: Longing to Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 06:05:05 AM AEST
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Lovely write.. Welcome to YPDC.......
Jenni


Re: Longing to Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 07:42:10 AM AEST
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Gorgeous poetry. The words convey the emotion brilliantly.

sleepless_siren


Re: Longing to Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 02:34:58 PM AEST
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wonderful!!


Re: Longing to Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 01:53:19 AM AEST
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perfectly done...great job

Lindsey


Re: Longing to Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 06:41:04 PM AEST
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lovely write i love your title too:) hugs nessa




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