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Array ( [sid] => 143472 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I feel much better [time] => 2008-06-24 17:43:02 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I feel much better



Yesterday morning,

our sister came to see our mother,

when she learnt the expected date of childbirth is coming,

she asked me if I had been to see the doctor,

I told her I feel well,

so I was never there......



"But it is a serious matter for you."

our sister was very worried about it,

so she took me to the hospital......



When the doctor told me,

the fetal heart rhythm of our baby was not too good,

it was getting on my nerves.

Her words sounded fishy,

but I minded very much......



Yesterday afternoon,

after asking off my office,

I went to another hospital immediately.

When the doctor told me the same word.

fear crept into my mind......



Last night,

when I told you what had happened,

I could see the news quite upset you.

But your words make me better,


"I care for you very much,

your safety is always uppermost in my mind.

Don't be so morbid,

as I promised you,

I will be at your side."



What will happen,

I really don't know.

but I know,

I have to confront danger and ......

Now I feel sleepy,

I want to say nothing but sorry......




XXX [comments] => 2 [counter] => 142 [topic] => 48 [informant] => holy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
I feel much better

Contributed by holy on Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 05:43:02 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I feel much better



Yesterday morning,

our sister came to see our mother,

when she learnt the expected date of childbirth is coming,

she asked me if I had been to see the doctor,

I told her I feel well,

so I was never there......



"But it is a serious matter for you."

our sister was very worried about it,

so she took me to the hospital......



When the doctor told me,

the fetal heart rhythm of our baby was not too good,

it was getting on my nerves.

Her words sounded fishy,

but I minded very much......



Yesterday afternoon,

after asking off my office,

I went to another hospital immediately.

When the doctor told me the same word.

fear crept into my mind......



Last night,

when I told you what had happened,

I could see the news quite upset you.

But your words make me better,


"I care for you very much,

your safety is always uppermost in my mind.

Don't be so morbid,

as I promised you,

I will be at your side."



What will happen,

I really don't know.

but I know,

I have to confront danger and ......

Now I feel sleepy,

I want to say nothing but sorry......




XXX




Copyright © holy ... [ 2008-06-24 17:43:02]
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Re: I feel much better (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 24th June 2008 @ 07:22:29 PM AEST
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well now, if this is about yourself...Congratulations!!!
I hope everything will be alright....hugs.


Re: I feel much better (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 25th June 2008 @ 03:11:04 AM AEST
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Awww Sis, This is good...and I know all will be well....
Talk to you soon....
Hugs
Jenni




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