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I would catch a falling star
Place it in your window
Because of who you are.

If I were the sun
Throught the clouds I'd shine
Leave enough raindrops
For you to walk anytime.

If I were a rose so red
That in spring time blooms
I would take all my petals
Toss them around your room.

If I were a great poet
Make all words rhyme
A poem I would write
To share with you all the time.

If I were an Angel
I would fly across the sea
Set on your verandah
And have a cup of tea.

If I could, Loving Whispers
I would be there today
Hold your hand and listen
To all you have to say.

This was written for you
Dances in Storm
Because I love you
I wrote you this little poem.

Aggie Anne
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IF I WERE

Contributed by Annie on Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 12:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

If I were a moonbeam
I would catch a falling star
Place it in your window
Because of who you are.

If I were the sun
Throught the clouds I'd shine
Leave enough raindrops
For you to walk anytime.

If I were a rose so red
That in spring time blooms
I would take all my petals
Toss them around your room.

If I were a great poet
Make all words rhyme
A poem I would write
To share with you all the time.

If I were an Angel
I would fly across the sea
Set on your verandah
And have a cup of tea.

If I could, Loving Whispers
I would be there today
Hold your hand and listen
To all you have to say.

This was written for you
Dances in Storm
Because I love you
I wrote you this little poem.

Aggie Anne

Copyright © Annie ... [ 2003-03-15 12:30:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: IF I WERE (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 05:16:49 PM AEST
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awwwww annie......I feel the same way :o) What a sweet write my dear friend. Well one!!

Re: IF I WERE (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 08:16:09 PM AEST
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WOW!! This is so very beautiful... I just loved the flow in this...and the imagery..
Welcome to YPDC, Annie.. Looking forward to more great writes from you..
Jenni

Re: IF I WERE (User Rating: 1 )
by Annie on Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 09:33:46 PM AEST
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Hi Jenni..Thank you for your nice comments.. they were a warm welcome to a new place that I can't find my way around yet. I hope to be posting some more as soon as I can thanks again ..

Re: IF I WERE (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 12:52:16 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this poem ... you have some lovely things to say, and for someone who writes the most beautiful poetry I've read. Well done. ... Jan

Re: IF I WERE (User Rating: 1 )
by Annie on Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 02:01:18 PM AEST
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Hi DreamWeaver...Thank You for the kind words. and Sharon has been off the net for several days and I miss her..She is such a beatuiful person and does write poetry like no one else..Thanks again for your good comments. When I find my way around this new site I will read yours but I am lost once I leave my account!!!!!!!!

Re: IF I WERE (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 11:21:07 PM AEST
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very sweet poem...and she sounds like a lovely lady... i found a friend in an aussie on this site too (dreamweaver) they seem to be the friendliest people... thank you for sharing

Lindsey

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