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Array ( [sid] => 14314 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Rock Bottom [time] => 2003-03-14 22:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Don't You Dare Critize Me
Or The Things I Write
When You Have No Clue
What I Go Through
Day To Day And All Day Long
You Don't Even Know The Half Of It
All The Bull***** I Have To Put Up With
You Don't Know What It's Like
You're Not Me
You Don't Know How Many Nights
I Stayed At Home And Cried
Or The Reasons Why
You Don't Know What I'm Feeling
Or Understand My Thoughts
So Shut Your Mouth

How Dare You Bring Me Down
I'm Already At The Bottom
It's Sad How Far Away I Am
I've Just Been Drifting Along
And I'm At The Point Now
That I Can Say
I Don't Care Anymore
About Anything Or Anyone
This Life Of Mine I've Begun To Hate
And That Just Proves
I've Hit Rock Bottom [comments] => 2 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 6 [informant] => SugarCoatedSweetness [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Rock Bottom

Contributed by SugarCoatedSweetness on Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 10:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Don't You Dare Critize Me
Or The Things I Write
When You Have No Clue
What I Go Through
Day To Day And All Day Long
You Don't Even Know The Half Of It
All The Bull***** I Have To Put Up With
You Don't Know What It's Like
You're Not Me
You Don't Know How Many Nights
I Stayed At Home And Cried
Or The Reasons Why
You Don't Know What I'm Feeling
Or Understand My Thoughts
So Shut Your Mouth

How Dare You Bring Me Down
I'm Already At The Bottom
It's Sad How Far Away I Am
I've Just Been Drifting Along
And I'm At The Point Now
That I Can Say
I Don't Care Anymore
About Anything Or Anyone
This Life Of Mine I've Begun To Hate
And That Just Proves
I've Hit Rock Bottom

Copyright © SugarCoatedSweetness ... [ 2003-03-14 22:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Rock Bottom (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 12:56:11 AM AEST
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I liked this except it was so sad. I to feel the same way about ppl not knowing the full extent of whats going on your not alone. I hope writing htese poems helps!

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Rock Bottom (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 07:28:24 PM AEST
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Im sorry your having such a hard time right now.
I know how you feel. Im sending you a hug and much love.
Michelle

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