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If today my luck all went down hill
Let me tell you how my time I would fill

If my eyes were closed so I could no longer see
Your beautiful face my mind would remember in front of me

If I could no longer use my sense of touch
I would imagine the feel of your soft skin that I would miss so much

If I become deaf no longer to hear
My mind would replay when you whispered ‘I Love You’ in my ear

If I could no longer smell, my nose just there to breathe
The scent of your perfume would be what my mind would retrieve

If my mouth could no longer taste
The flavor of your rosy red lips my mind would embrace

If my limbs I were no longer able to use
I know you would hold me and protect me from abuse

Impressions are like fingerprints you leave from the start
These are the impressions you left in my heart


Deadwriter

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IMPRESSIONS

Contributed by deadwriter on Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 06:42:28 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



Impressions

If today my luck all went down hill
Let me tell you how my time I would fill

If my eyes were closed so I could no longer see
Your beautiful face my mind would remember in front of me

If I could no longer use my sense of touch
I would imagine the feel of your soft skin that I would miss so much

If I become deaf no longer to hear
My mind would replay when you whispered ‘I Love You’ in my ear

If I could no longer smell, my nose just there to breathe
The scent of your perfume would be what my mind would retrieve

If my mouth could no longer taste
The flavor of your rosy red lips my mind would embrace

If my limbs I were no longer able to use
I know you would hold me and protect me from abuse

Impressions are like fingerprints you leave from the start
These are the impressions you left in my heart


Deadwriter





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Re: IMPRESSIONS (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 06:46:41 AM AEST
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Ahhhhh this is simply breath taking. I tried to pick a very favorite line but I an unable for the entire write is lovely.

Hugs

Michelle


Re: IMPRESSIONS (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 07:10:14 AM AEST
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Love the concept and the words made me think about each set of lines. Great write........Mike


Re: IMPRESSIONS (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 09:36:12 AM AEST
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I am sure the recipient of this beautiful write loved it... well done, Deadwriter...
Jenni


Re: IMPRESSIONS (User Rating: 1 )
by tifrob on Wednesday, 11th June 2008 @ 03:04:45 PM AEST
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BEAUTIFUL!!! I loved it.

~Me~




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