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Array ( [sid] => 143044 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wordless promise [time] => 2008-06-07 20:12:06 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Wordless promise

For a wordless promise,

I was in a silence following you.

when you were tired,vexed,

or restless,

I was your greatest company always.

For a unspoken promise,

I will still be in a silence to following you.

wherever you go,

whatever you do,

I will always be your dearest wife.

Love is a special promise in silence,

all our stories will flash in our memories.

Love is a speechless promise,

with all the day of our life,

I will tell all our love stories.

I am always so full of life,

I am always so full of hope,

because I am used to all the cold weather,

despite all these discouragements,

I refused to give up.

This is why,

the alive embers of a former passion can still be seen in my articles.

Yes,

wordless promise,

wordless following,

silent company,

silent love,

all these,

I would like.

Yes,

I am the strong and silent type,

and I have good taste.

You know,

I dislike the adventurous life,

I enjoy a more peaceful domestic life,

but,

I want everybody to know,

our love is finally winning,

and every story about our love is very interesting.

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Wordless promise

Contributed by holy on Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 08:12:06 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Wordless promise

For a wordless promise,

I was in a silence following you.

when you were tired,vexed,

or restless,

I was your greatest company always.

For a unspoken promise,

I will still be in a silence to following you.

wherever you go,

whatever you do,

I will always be your dearest wife.

Love is a special promise in silence,

all our stories will flash in our memories.

Love is a speechless promise,

with all the day of our life,

I will tell all our love stories.

I am always so full of life,

I am always so full of hope,

because I am used to all the cold weather,

despite all these discouragements,

I refused to give up.

This is why,

the alive embers of a former passion can still be seen in my articles.

Yes,

wordless promise,

wordless following,

silent company,

silent love,

all these,

I would like.

Yes,

I am the strong and silent type,

and I have good taste.

You know,

I dislike the adventurous life,

I enjoy a more peaceful domestic life,

but,

I want everybody to know,

our love is finally winning,

and every story about our love is very interesting.

Copyright Â© holy ... [ 2008-06-07 20:12:06]
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Re: Wordless promise (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 11:20:03 PM AEST
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You got that right, Holy. Every story IS very interesting. A beautiful write this is...
You have surely come a long way...
Hugs
Your Big Sister...Jenni

Re: Wordless promise (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Sunday, 8th June 2008 @ 02:21:03 AM AEST
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It's encouraging to see how well you express yourself, without falling into repetitive clichés. I wish more poets today were able to do that consistently (myself included). Keep it up!

I found the fourth stanza very encouraging.

- Andrew

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