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Array ( [sid] => 142990 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Savior [time] => 2008-06-05 21:36:48 [hometext] => Do I still have it? [bodytext] => Tearing me apart,
Drowning my heart,
I don't know where to start,

The voices in my head,
Damn me to be dead,
I choose to live in agony instead,

Cut my wrists,
Ball my fists,
A chance at life I guessed I missed,

Roses fall,
Lillies stand tall,
Your name I call,

Darkness now consumes me,
Want to be free,
Want to flee,

Death and dieing,
To stay alive I'm still trying,
Why are you still lying,

Who can cure,
Something so impure,
Heaven send me a savior!

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Savior

Contributed by Craze on Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 09:36:48 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Tearing me apart,
Drowning my heart,
I don't know where to start,

The voices in my head,
Damn me to be dead,
I choose to live in agony instead,

Cut my wrists,
Ball my fists,
A chance at life I guessed I missed,

Roses fall,
Lillies stand tall,
Your name I call,

Darkness now consumes me,
Want to be free,
Want to flee,

Death and dieing,
To stay alive I'm still trying,
Why are you still lying,

Who can cure,
Something so impure,
Heaven send me a savior!

Copyright © Craze ... [ 2008-06-05 21:36:48]
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Re: Savior (User Rating: 1 )
by SOCALGIRL on Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 11:09:33 PM AEST
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This poem is very deep, I can picture it as a cry for help.

Re: Savior (User Rating: 1 )
by ZiggyB on Friday, 6th June 2008 @ 01:33:25 AM AEST
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It appears that you are enduring...but still looking for help.

Keep pluggin'

Good write

Re: Savior (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Friday, 6th June 2008 @ 01:58:21 AM AEST
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I like that we can feel your struggle. pain, always a very strong teacher. who can cure? let us look inside. . . peace. elle

Re: Savior (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 10th June 2008 @ 02:16:53 AM AEST
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very deep and emotional. good write. however all of us have felt like this from time to time. and we continue to feel like this until we realize that searching for someone else to help mus never goes quite the way we planned. my advice to you is to get up dust yourself of and realize that your happiness and life have nothing to do with who is around us or our enviroments but rather ourselves. look inside yourself for the answers

Re: Savior (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Tuesday, 10th June 2008 @ 09:19:12 PM AEST
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You my friend have definately still got it.
Great write.

Deadwriter

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