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But never will l forget your touch
I thought our love was meant to last
But those days have gone and past

Why is life so hard without you?
I don't know what there is left to say or do
My days are empty now that you gone
I miss the days we sat and talked till dawn

When will I be free of this pain?
There's nothing left for you to gain
I felt as if you were the one
But you left and now things are done

When we were together
Everything felt so much better
Now that we have come to rest
My memories of you will always be the best.
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Moving On

Contributed by onelostsoul on Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 07:48:18 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

You made me hurt so much
But never will l forget your touch
I thought our love was meant to last
But those days have gone and past

Why is life so hard without you?
I don't know what there is left to say or do
My days are empty now that you gone
I miss the days we sat and talked till dawn

When will I be free of this pain?
There's nothing left for you to gain
I felt as if you were the one
But you left and now things are done

When we were together
Everything felt so much better
Now that we have come to rest
My memories of you will always be the best.

Copyright © onelostsoul ... [ 2008-06-04 07:48:18]
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Re: Moving On (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 11:17:54 AM AEST
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indeed moving on is hard/painful/sucks, but it must be done and i believe that makes people stronger. hopefully u and the person ur talking about are still somehow connected. nice write. good luck

Re: Moving On (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy on Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 10:34:45 PM AEST
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I can so relate to you feel. i hate moving on as you still seem to cling to a hope of just maybe.... but we've got to be realistic no matter how much it hurts! Beautifully written....

Puppy :)

Re: Moving On (User Rating: 1 )
by onelostsoul on Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 11:25:08 PM AEST
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It is definitely hard to move on but its better than holding on to false hope...

Thanks for the encouraging words and the nice comments, it is greatly appreciated!

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