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Array ( [sid] => 14271 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Worst Party Ever [time] => 2003-03-14 05:00:00 [hometext] => Lately my friends have started doing stuff I don't agree with. Andrea's started smoking pot. Sagan's started drinking. They're both really hypocritical. Andrea's always said how smoking is so gross and pot has more cancer causing crap in it than cigarettes.. RRR! Sorry, I'm rambling, anyway, I had this dream and it scared me so I wrote it down in the form of a poem. [bodytext] => Went to a party
Thought it would be fun
Bad things happened
Now I'm done

I did nothing
I'm happy to say
But my two best friends
Aren't very happy today

Andrea got stoned
Couldn't think strait
Couldn't make the right dicisions
Tiny little incisions
In her wrists
Thought she'd see how it looked
It wasn't that great.
*Ryan found her on the floor
Her life half gone
In another minute or two
She would have been done
Now she's in ICU

Sagan wanted to get drunk
She thought she'd like the high
It was everything she expected it to be
But she didn't expect to cry

**Waldo and her
They had sex
But they didn't use a condom
Nine months later
They had proof
But they didn't have it for long
They really did goof
They knew it was true
Their little girl was stillborn
Must've been the booze

So here we are:
Andrea's in Juvi
She was sent there after
She got out of ICU
You see
Sagan and Waldo
Have not again spoken
And Sagan can't stop crying
She visits her baby's grave every day
And we occasionally
Go see Andy
I'm thankful that they're both okay
But really I'm the only one left. Me.
Sometimes I sit and think
And I praise God I never did anything.

*=Ryan is Andrea's boyfriend
**=Waldo is the guy Sagan likes [comments] => 1 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 48 [informant] => poetic_tragedy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Worst Party Ever

Contributed by poetic_tragedy on Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 05:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Went to a party
Thought it would be fun
Bad things happened
Now I'm done

I did nothing
I'm happy to say
But my two best friends
Aren't very happy today

Andrea got stoned
Couldn't think strait
Couldn't make the right dicisions
Tiny little incisions
In her wrists
Thought she'd see how it looked
It wasn't that great.
*Ryan found her on the floor
Her life half gone
In another minute or two
She would have been done
Now she's in ICU

Sagan wanted to get drunk
She thought she'd like the high
It was everything she expected it to be
But she didn't expect to cry

**Waldo and her
They had sex
But they didn't use a condom
Nine months later
They had proof
But they didn't have it for long
They really did goof
They knew it was true
Their little girl was stillborn
Must've been the booze

So here we are:
Andrea's in Juvi
She was sent there after
She got out of ICU
You see
Sagan and Waldo
Have not again spoken
And Sagan can't stop crying
She visits her baby's grave every day
And we occasionally
Go see Andy
I'm thankful that they're both okay
But really I'm the only one left. Me.
Sometimes I sit and think
And I praise God I never did anything.

*=Ryan is Andrea's boyfriend
**=Waldo is the guy Sagan likes

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Re: Worst Party Ever (User Rating: 1 )
by sublime_suicide on Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 06:11:40 PM AEST
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this poem is cool.. i don't know how else to describe it..

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