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Hush this heart within its foundation hear the pleas of lost moments
Search for moments more, distances beyond the shores
The shores of swollen rivers where tears softly fall
Indulged in the void of self where spirits whispers in the tree’s

Ghost of ghost and haunted halls nothing silent within the walls

Hear the soul and feel the beat of stirred feelings with broken heartbeats
Dance with her in the night and embrace the haunted shadows sighs
Intruding on heart strings where the music plays
Brushing away the blue and erasing away the grays

Lifting her to her feet to hug the blue away

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~Brushing away her blue~

Contributed by shelby on Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 11:13:27 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Be still the moments of sweet surrender wounds upon a heart so tender

Hush this heart within its foundation hear the pleas of lost moments
Search for moments more, distances beyond the shores
The shores of swollen rivers where tears softly fall
Indulged in the void of self where spirits whispers in the tree’s

Ghost of ghost and haunted halls nothing silent within the walls

Hear the soul and feel the beat of stirred feelings with broken heartbeats
Dance with her in the night and embrace the haunted shadows sighs
Intruding on heart strings where the music plays
Brushing away the blue and erasing away the grays

Lifting her to her feet to hug the blue away

center><

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Re: ~Brushing away her blue~ (User Rating: 1 )
by deadwriter on Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 11:31:45 AM AEST
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This is simply beautiful.

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Re: ~Brushing away her blue~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 11:36:09 AM AEST
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Very emotional piece, Michelle... love the format....
Jenni

Re: ~Brushing away her blue~ (User Rating: 1 )
by holy on Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 12:33:56 PM AEST
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Love it, thank you again.

Re: ~Brushing away her blue~ (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 06:45:37 AM AEST
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hauntingly beautiful my friend

Shari

Re: ~Brushing away her blue~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Muinanyere on Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 08:07:13 AM AEST
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You are very talented, I love the flow of your poems it's very unique. Keep up the good work!

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