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Array ( [sid] => 142520 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mortality of men [time] => 2008-05-20 21:10:55 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A scream fades as it echoes
shaking the morals of humanity
and blood rinses the eyes of men,
mortality's day has ended.
The sunrise goes unnoticed, unappreciated
and Music stops without realization,
the land has become saturated
and a baby cries in silence
into the world of darkness
the earth is eclipsed by its immortality,
humanity dies when life does not. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 43 [informant] => HellRaiser [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Mortality of men

Contributed by HellRaiser on Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 09:10:55 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



A scream fades as it echoes
shaking the morals of humanity
and blood rinses the eyes of men,
mortality's day has ended.
The sunrise goes unnoticed, unappreciated
and Music stops without realization,
the land has become saturated
and a baby cries in silence
into the world of darkness
the earth is eclipsed by its immortality,
humanity dies when life does not.




Copyright © HellRaiser ... [ 2008-05-20 21:10:55]
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Re: Mortality of men (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 10:19:59 PM AEST
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Interesting piece...I liked it. There is a part that I like better than any other...everything flowed together nicely...Good Job

Rich


Re: Mortality of men (User Rating: 1 )
by 6whiteRoses on Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 10:33:05 PM AEST
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Very strong....nice job!


Re: Mortality of men (User Rating: 1 )
by SilverRain on Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 03:56:03 AM AEST
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Well thought through.... very descriptive. I enjoyed this. Well done.


Re: Mortality of men (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 09:16:24 AM AEST
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I find a feeling while reading this I cannot describe at the moment and that is what I love about poetry.

Humanity dies when life does not........ profound statement.... I had just had this conversation with someone the other day great write.

Michelle


Re: Mortality of men (User Rating: 1 )
by fluffy42 on Friday, 3rd February 2012 @ 12:33:39 PM AEST
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i love it




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