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Array ( [sid] => 142433 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => She Wants [time] => 2008-05-16 22:36:31 [hometext] => [bodytext] => She wants to let it all go
she wants to forget about her past
and move on into her future
she wants you to know everything
and although it happened in her past
she cant seem to let it go
when she was hurt once
it stuck with her
she remembers the abuse
like it was yesterday
even though it was years ago
and she cant help but think
of what might happen to her again
she barely made it
through the pain
the first time
and she's not sure
she can make it again
she wants someone to
actually pay attention to her plea
no matter how annoying it may be
and actually have someone
not say anything about it
but just listen to her
and try to understand
what she's going through
without making her feel stupid
she just needs you to understand
without comparing her
to someone else
cuz she's not like everyone else
and she needs you to realize that
before she gets hurt again [comments] => 1 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 2 [informant] => strawberry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

She Wants

Contributed by strawberry on Friday, 16th May 2008 @ 10:36:31 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

She wants to let it all go
she wants to forget about her past
and move on into her future
she wants you to know everything
and although it happened in her past
she cant seem to let it go
when she was hurt once
it stuck with her
she remembers the abuse
like it was yesterday
even though it was years ago
and she cant help but think
of what might happen to her again
she barely made it
through the pain
the first time
and she's not sure
she can make it again
she wants someone to
actually pay attention to her plea
no matter how annoying it may be
and actually have someone
not say anything about it
but just listen to her
and try to understand
what she's going through
without making her feel stupid
she just needs you to understand
without comparing her
to someone else
cuz she's not like everyone else
and she needs you to realize that
before she gets hurt again

Copyright © strawberry ... [ 2008-05-16 22:36:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: She Wants (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 17th May 2008 @ 07:07:56 AM AEST
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Touching write.. I hope she gets what she wants and deserves....
Jenni

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