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Array ( [sid] => 142375 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It sucks to be you [time] => 2008-05-14 13:00:55 [hometext] => People try to defer their [bodytext] => Before you close your eyes at night are you happy with what you have done?
Or do those demons come into your dreams and haunt you one by one?
Can you look yourself straight in the mirror and be proud of what you say?
Or do you go on doing what you do and walk past the mirror each day?

Does it make you feel good to play the game of hide and seek?
Casting stones and wounding others hearts.
No care no thought except it feels good, taking away your own pain.
It is what you lack in your own world that makes you act this way.

Your misery is great and each moment there is a raw and tender nerve.
Then you strike out and cause hate and discontent
your hate and nasty energy on someone kind unfurled.
Does it suck to be you? Yes I must say it does........

When you make your own bed and then find yourself alone,
do you for one minute think you did this on your own.
Not all will put up with the game and pain inflicted upon their hearts
so you search and seek for a new victim cause without them you are lost.

Does it suck to me you, yes it must!

I can look myself in the mirror and see it clearly and plain.
I know what I am and I know what I am not
I know I do not set out to play a game.
I stand clean and bare, an open book for all the world to read.

Does it suck to me? No I can live with what I do. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 43 [informant] => shelby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
It sucks to be you

Contributed by shelby on Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 01:00:55 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Before you close your eyes at night are you happy with what you have done?
Or do those demons come into your dreams and haunt you one by one?
Can you look yourself straight in the mirror and be proud of what you say?
Or do you go on doing what you do and walk past the mirror each day?

Does it make you feel good to play the game of hide and seek?
Casting stones and wounding others hearts.
No care no thought except it feels good, taking away your own pain.
It is what you lack in your own world that makes you act this way.

Your misery is great and each moment there is a raw and tender nerve.
Then you strike out and cause hate and discontent
your hate and nasty energy on someone kind unfurled.
Does it suck to be you? Yes I must say it does........

When you make your own bed and then find yourself alone,
do you for one minute think you did this on your own.
Not all will put up with the game and pain inflicted upon their hearts
so you search and seek for a new victim cause without them you are lost.

Does it suck to me you, yes it must!

I can look myself in the mirror and see it clearly and plain.
I know what I am and I know what I am not
I know I do not set out to play a game.
I stand clean and bare, an open book for all the world to read.

Does it suck to me? No I can live with what I do.




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Re: It sucks to be you (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 01:16:40 PM AEST
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Girl,
you said a mouth full.
Very powerfull write formed in wisdom.
huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: It sucks to be you (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 01:30:54 PM AEST
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humm..I wondering who this might be directed at..if crap is hitting the fan, let me know..i`m at my best when I`m guarding you my friend. someone in your face, turn me loose..I am relentless...Crow


Re: It sucks to be you (User Rating: 1 )
by -Nik-91- on Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 08:58:00 PM AEST
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wow
very good write
very powerful
and yet so very true
its a game they all play
playing with someones heart to them is just a game even though love is not a game

keep writting

Nikki xxx


Re: It sucks to be you (User Rating: 1 )
by owkenny on Saturday, 17th May 2008 @ 02:56:47 PM AEST
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very nice. then again i have a thing for relentlessness.




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