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[aid] => Mick
[title] => Artistic Lover
[time] => 2003-03-13 05:00:00
[hometext] => This will be my last poem posted here at YPDC :( I just don't have the time to be properly involved as I have 5 kids and...well..need I say more ?? lol.I want to thank all the wonderful people here for their feedback and support.I will try to visit back here to read your words so keep writing and always no matter what,let your souls dance.Thankyou again and if you wish to continue reading my poems,please contact me and I will give you the URL. (((hugs)))
[bodytext] => With the finesse of a velvet kiss,your words fell to my eyes
Painting beautiful pictures,fields of yellow and azure skies
As my body lay beneath your spell,my mind held in your trance
I could feel your abstract breeze,as through my hair it danced
Temptations licked at feelings,coursing through my every fibre
And I crawled up to your fluted tongue,I needed to be higher
So close to your soft whispers,nearer to your kiss of colours
Lost within your contoured words,I'm ever me, and no other
Moonlit eyes now drink of stars,from the canvas of your soul
Replenished in the wonders,as they take a midnight stroll
Across your skin and through your mind,I wander with a smile
As there you love me patiently,painting all the while
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Artistic Lover
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LovingWhispers
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Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 05:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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With the finesse of a velvet kiss,your words fell to my eyes
Painting beautiful pictures,fields of yellow and azure skies
As my body lay beneath your spell,my mind held in your trance
I could feel your abstract breeze,as through my hair it danced
Temptations licked at feelings,coursing through my every fibre
And I crawled up to your fluted tongue,I needed to be higher
So close to your soft whispers,nearer to your kiss of colours
Lost within your contoured words,I'm ever me, and no other
Moonlit eyes now drink of stars,from the canvas of your soul
Replenished in the wonders,as they take a midnight stroll
Across your skin and through your mind,I wander with a smile
As there you love me patiently,painting all the while
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
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2003-03-13 05:00:00]
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Re: Artistic Lover
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 05:53:08 AM AEST
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| This is gorgeous .. and I'm so sad that you are leaving ... you are one of my favourite poets - your words always so romantic and beautifully written. Take care ... and look after those little ones .... I hope your dreams are fulfilled ... Jan |
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by Amoeba on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 05:55:49 AM AEST
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| Always save the best for last, good read. Good luck. |
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by venkat on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 06:16:14 AM AEST
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| its alright, come again friend. .. venkat. |
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Re: Artistic Lover
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 06:35:44 AM AEST
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This is very sad news indeed, LovingWhispers, but always...kids come first.. Hope you enjoy your time away form here...and know that you'll be missed...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Artistic Lover
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 07:19:34 AM AEST
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| This will be a poorer site without you to enrich it with the gold of your words...I hand you one final rose at ypdc for this write that touched me so deeply...more so than you can know. (((((hugs))))) ( line9...page 62) |
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Re: Artistic Lover
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 09:00:36 AM AEST
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Well I can clearly relate I too need to slow down on coming to the site with two boys & 6 dogs! I hope the best for you!
Your words here beautiful! Good lucj! Christina |
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Re: Artistic Lover
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by roisin on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 11:37:41 AM AEST
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Sharon; as always, beautiful words ....have found your work senuous,heart stirring, erotic,delicious and romantic, and of course quite inspiring at times, as I've told you...I will of course return often to your web site to continue reading...
ta very much
rosie |
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Re: Artistic Lover
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 01:25:32 PM AEST
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Aww I'm gonna miss your poetry! How can I contact you to get that url??? Wow, 5 kids, that's crazy!! lol. Well, I hope everything goes the way you want it to. Blessed be you and yours!
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: Artistic Lover
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 03:02:14 PM AEST
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Sharon another A+ plus poem I loved this give me your URL I love your poems e-mail me at x_sabotage_x@hotmail.com. Wish you the best.
Bobo (Joel) |
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 09:09:12 PM AEST
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| Thank you for enriching this site with your poems. God bless. |
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Re: Artistic Lover
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 10:58:42 PM AEST
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Although I am new to this sight,your words have been a blessing to behold!
Angel always....Godspeed! 0:-) joni |
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Re: Artistic Lover
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by shelby on
Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 01:54:58 AM AEST
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| Iv only been here a short time but have enjoyed your poetry. They are wonderful. Please send me your url. Good luck with your five kids, thats alot of kids!!LOL. Im going to miss reading your poems on here. Michelle |
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