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Since I knew you that day

I never cried once again

I didn't know when our world came into being

I didn't even understand what you were feeling

I had hoped that we should often meet

as long as you wouldn't be upset

That day I met you on the way

you told me we can meet every sunday

how nice

you gave me such a surprise

as if a deer in me I was getting restless

and the night I had wonderful dreams

You went aways just I came

I saw the aritcle you corrected for me you left

What a surprise

I was deeply grateful to you for your bounteous gifts

because that time you were very busy

I had told you don't be in a hurry

the day was my birthday

your presence was very great

you could imagine how happy I was

to me it was a complete surprise

I knew the road which blocked with snow

I bet you won't come because you had to walk very slowly

When I fear that I will make mistake

your words always made me comfortable

I told you I was very poor in many things

your smile always made me promiseful

you are a handsome man without fear

you are a great favourite in the big big world

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It was a complete surprise to me

Contributed by holy on Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 01:07:35 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

It was a complete surprise to me

Since I knew you that day

I never cried once again

I didn't know when our world came into being

I didn't even understand what you were feeling

I had hoped that we should often meet

as long as you wouldn't be upset

That day I met you on the way

you told me we can meet every sunday

how nice

you gave me such a surprise

as if a deer in me I was getting restless

and the night I had wonderful dreams

You went aways just I came

I saw the aritcle you corrected for me you left

What a surprise

I was deeply grateful to you for your bounteous gifts

because that time you were very busy

I had told you don't be in a hurry

the day was my birthday

your presence was very great

you could imagine how happy I was

to me it was a complete surprise

I knew the road which blocked with snow

I bet you won't come because you had to walk very slowly

When I fear that I will make mistake

your words always made me comfortable

I told you I was very poor in many things

your smile always made me promiseful

you are a handsome man without fear

you are a great favourite in the big big world

Copyright © holy ... [ 2008-04-25 13:07:35]
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Re: It was a complete surprise to me (User Rating: 1 )
by holy on Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 04:56:08 PM AEST
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you told me we can meet every sunday
you told me we could meet every sunday

Re: It was a complete surprise to me (User Rating: 1 )
by holy on Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 05:03:01 PM AEST
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I had told you don't be in a hurry
I had told you not had to do it in a hurry

Re: It was a complete surprise to me (User Rating: 1 )
by holy on Friday, 25th April 2008 @ 05:10:56 PM AEST
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I had told you don't be in a hurry
I had told you not to do it in a hurry

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