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it came from you and took my blues away.
It said you were giving a birthday bash,
I needn’t buy a present of much cash.

Birthday parties are great fun to attend,
if I wished I could bring some dearsome friend.
Ah, little need for thinking of such a one,
other girl than you for me there is none.

You’re the apple of my eye, my heart’s flame,
that burns my mind day and night I can’t tame.
It’s enough you’ll be there what else matters?
Friday night plans it completely shatters.

This letter in hand is shimmering gold,
More precious than the bowling team ten fold.
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Your Letter

Contributed by ramfire on Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 12:41:28 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I got a piece of mail the other day,
it came from you and took my blues away.
It said you were giving a birthday bash,
I needn’t buy a present of much cash.

Birthday parties are great fun to attend,
if I wished I could bring some dearsome friend.
Ah, little need for thinking of such a one,
other girl than you for me there is none.

You’re the apple of my eye, my heart’s flame,
that burns my mind day and night I can’t tame.
It’s enough you’ll be there what else matters?
Friday night plans it completely shatters.

This letter in hand is shimmering gold,
More precious than the bowling team ten fold.

Copyright Â© ramfire ... [ 2008-04-20 00:41:28]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Your Letter (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 01:06:20 AM AEST
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Awww this is so beautiful.... Hope you have a great time...
I found a couple of the rhymes a bit forced, but that's just my opinion. I did enjoy this...
Jenni

Re: Your Letter (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 07:00:47 AM AEST
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this was a really cheerful uplifting read.. it brought a smile to my face.. great job here I enjoyed this alot.. a very happy write =D

rock on,

vampyress Jenni

Re: Your Letter (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Sunday, 20th April 2008 @ 08:18:38 AM AEST
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A beautiful letter and a bit romance on the make>.
Excellent write~

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