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Array ( [sid] => 141653 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Look Around [time] => 2008-04-17 16:29:35 [hometext] => Just a few thoughts ...Running through my head today...Enjoy...& thanks for reading!! [bodytext] => I look around

What happend I say, Screaming

From town to town

Running her down....

But I don't see anyone concerned,

Nobody looks burned, Except me,

What just happened

As I look around....

The sun is dull and clouds are gray

As I walk the other way,

Not looking back cuss I don't care

My heart bleeds out, I sware....

I look around,

But what I see is what,

That's a friend I found

In this Indy town....

So I came home

Sit and say,

Blessings are coming

In my way....

But there is hope and that is true

So I sit and ponder and think of you,

Your my friend I stay in to

Hey Babydoll, It's you....

So that's what you get

When your so blue

Never give up or break into....

For when your alone

Don't wear any frown

For there she is....

If you only look around....
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I Look Around

Contributed by 143 on Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 04:29:35 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I look around

What happend I say, Screaming

From town to town

Running her down....

But I don't see anyone concerned,

Nobody looks burned, Except me,

What just happened

As I look around....

The sun is dull and clouds are gray

As I walk the other way,

Not looking back cuss I don't care

My heart bleeds out, I sware....

I look around,

But what I see is what,

That's a friend I found

In this Indy town....

So I came home

Sit and say,

Blessings are coming

In my way....

But there is hope and that is true

So I sit and ponder and think of you,

Your my friend I stay in to

Hey Babydoll, It's you....

So that's what you get

When your so blue

Never give up or break into....

For when your alone

Don't wear any frown

For there she is....

If you only look around....

Copyright © 143 ... [ 2008-04-17 16:29:35]
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Re: I Look Around (User Rating: 1 )
by SilverRain on Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 06:56:39 PM AEST
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very inspiring...stunning write.

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