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Worried sick as I am
Stuck in this traffic jam
My body has no sense
My mind someplace else
Going on the most dangerous journey
But thinking about my lovely honey

Coldness crawling on my skin
But I'm not worried about the weather’s spin
I wonder about who I care about
The only girl I can't live without

Where is she at this time?
Without her I got no rhyme
She’s my life, my love, my everything
For her I will do anything

I miss her so much it hurts
I want her so bad my heart’s going to burst
I love you baby, take care please
I'm more than ready to go overseas
Give up anything if that’s what it takes
For me to be with you, I’ll take all the stakes

I will gladly take hell
My life, I’ll happily sell
Anything for you
Everything is to be with you [comments] => 2 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 2 [informant] => alibof10 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

To One I Thought I Love

Contributed by alibof10 on Tuesday, 15th April 2008 @ 08:04:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Worried sick as I am
Stuck in this traffic jam
My body has no sense
My mind someplace else
Going on the most dangerous journey
But thinking about my lovely honey

Coldness crawling on my skin
But I'm not worried about the weather’s spin
I wonder about who I care about
The only girl I can't live without

Where is she at this time?
Without her I got no rhyme
She’s my life, my love, my everything
For her I will do anything

I miss her so much it hurts
I want her so bad my heart’s going to burst
I love you baby, take care please
I'm more than ready to go overseas
Give up anything if that’s what it takes
For me to be with you, I’ll take all the stakes

I will gladly take hell
My life, I’ll happily sell
Anything for you
Everything is to be with you

Copyright Â© alibof10 ... [ 2008-04-15 08:04:00]
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Re: To One I Thought I Love (User Rating: 1 )
by hostile_waffle on Tuesday, 15th April 2008 @ 08:44:50 AM AEST
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This is awesome. I'm not even kidding you.
I feel the same way about my crush.

Re: To One I Thought I Love (User Rating: 1 )
by xoBrokenxo on Tuesday, 15th April 2008 @ 12:16:56 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this. I love the rhymes and whoever this girl is...she's very lucky. Nice write.
=]

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