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[aid] => mick
[title] => not your typical poem
[time] => 2008-04-09 13:58:16
[hometext] => not your typical poem--- please comment!!
[bodytext] => prelude I know you all want to hear a little rhyme that rhymes anything that will take you out of your current state of mind well i can give you that fuel, just hit me with the fire but now I am getting bored, and you are getting tired so let me give you something that will open your eyes and possibly, to the depths of you, give you a surprise feeling is everything, so i will give you one last breathe hate me now? no, hate me then, i am feeling a momentary death Are you serious? really? really you are going to give it to me now? death feels so close when i can taste it on the back of your neck and i am swimming in it by the time lunch hits and around 12 o'clock i can't seem to stop thinking about you marks they are different none are the same your nose screams eat me and your eyes they tell me things that i thought no one was supposed to know you give me a short hello, and i hold onto the memory so long so strong that i bend as far back as i want, for i will not break not this time and your white mascara is running, (because i know that look) but you are with me and i can feel your temperature rising as the sun is lowering, as it is beginning to rain and everything that i have in me, at the moment, which is everything in the world, is weighing me down so much that i am afraid to not do anything because if i don't do anything than maybe i will have to face everything that i dont want to face but you you remember me don't you? ending I know it wasn't the typical, day to day thing I know that it wasn't normal, i know what i bring and it may not make sense, but dig deep into the words just one look at the sentence, and you will find verbs and i know that its not easy to decipher between phrases but at least my poem isn't a million pages [comments] => 3 [counter] => 276 [topic] => 43 [informant] => juliestevens18 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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