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[title] => She
[time] => 2008-03-27 19:13:59
[hometext] => Just my life.. Not finished - please tell me what you think could be better? (any comments on the language, grammar also much appreciated (english is not
[bodytext] => She wakes in the dark of night Voices in her head – too tired to pull up the fight Not strong enough, she gives in Again, she’s letting the voices win Letting them scream and shout In the silence their words seems hurtfully loud Leading her back to what’s never really said Thoughts – back and forth inside her head She is lost in her own lies She has to be strong, nobody may ever see if she cries It’s against the rules, they say All she can do is hide, and she may Never be the same again – it’s a little too late To ashamed to get seen, this was just her faith Nothing is left inside Not even a tiny hope she can find she is feeling lost in her own life, she cannot hide Only one thing can kill everything she’s feeling inside make her lost in time, kill the pain it’s an unbreakable chain she is the sound of silence nobody hears nobody sees the blood in her tears how should she step up and be strong? there's no point when everything goes wrong All she really wants is to run away In the darkness forever, herself to lay Go to sleep and never wake up She can’t make the little voices stop she is so different now everything changed – somehow she suddenly reached the bottom, went all wrong it has gone on for so long she is in a special state of mind the truth she cannot find If she should ever get better She would have to be light as a feather She would have to know that people would not go She would have the voices not to put up this show But she can’t seem to find the way which is right Somehow she long ago forgot how to fight She is going under, drowning in her lies She doesn’t care, she’s paying the price Only one thing she can do Only one thing can help her find a way through People tell her it’s the wrong way That she will have to get better one day But she cannot let this go, it’s all she can do Somehow, maybe one day, she can fight her way through? [comments] => 1 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 32 [informant] => BirdUnableTofFy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
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