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She
Contributed by
BirdUnableTofFy
on
Thursday, 27th March 2008 @ 07:13:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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She wakes in the dark of night
Voices in her head too tired to pull up the fight
Not strong enough, she gives in
Again, shes letting the voices win
Letting them scream and shout
In the silence their words seems hurtfully loud
Leading her back to whats never really said
Thoughts back and forth inside her head
She is lost in her own lies
She has to be strong, nobody may ever see if she cries
Its against the rules, they say
All she can do is hide, and she may
Never be the same again its a little too late
To ashamed to get seen, this was just her faith
Nothing is left inside
Not even a tiny hope she can find
she is feeling lost in her own life, she cannot hide
Only one thing can kill everything shes feeling inside
make her lost in time, kill the pain
its an unbreakable chain
she is the sound of silence nobody hears
nobody sees the blood in her tears
how should she step up and be strong?
there's no point when everything goes wrong
All she really wants is to run away
In the darkness forever, herself to lay
Go to sleep and never wake up
She cant make the little voices stop
she is so different now
everything changed somehow
she suddenly reached the bottom, went all wrong
it has gone on for so long
she is in a special state of mind
the truth she cannot find
If she should ever get better
She would have to be light as a feather
She would have to know that people would not go
She would have the voices not to put up this show
But she cant seem to find the way which is right
Somehow she long ago forgot how to fight
She is going under, drowning in her lies
She doesnt care, shes paying the price
Only one thing she can do
Only one thing can help her find a way through
People tell her its the wrong way
That she will have to get better one day
But she cannot let this go, its all she can do
Somehow, maybe one day, she can fight her way through?
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Re: She
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 28th March 2008 @ 10:53:56 PM AEST
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Great piece of work. I enjoyed reading it. Paints quite a picture.
The only thing that needs corrected I see is in the last stanza, second line, 'she's is'
Other than that, it is just fine.
Deadwriter
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