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~ Alone ~
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Thursday, 27th March 2008 @ 04:47:18 PM in AEST
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In a quiet room I see its noon...
I feel as far away as the moon...
Its quiet out here no noise to embrace...
The tears in my eyes sprayed like mace...
Alone I stand hands in my pocket...
I throw a few rocks up...
Just like a rocket...
Watch them sail up and fall back down...
What the hell am I doin in this town...
It gives me hope that Ive lost...
Id give anything no matter the cost...
But why beg and choose to be...
But for when you only look down on me...
I used to care never left alone...
Everynight wed talk on the phone...
And wisper our lies but to our surprise ...
With a few magic tricks we always compromised...
But thats gone alone is what I feel...
What hurts the most is when they reveal...
The love you once had has took a spill...
Your evil ways and looks to kill...
But thats ok you the one who left...
Your a quitter still and wasent the best...
But imma stand up and move on and on...
Thinking about this alone and what went wrong...
For now I see whats to be...
Its not me that hurt our glee...
I tried and was always there ...
Now I say this with a sware...
Your alone and feel this now...
Walk yourself that lonely mile...
Ill be back and when I am...
You can kiss my ass forever...
Sincerly,
Your Man...
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Re: ~ Alone ~
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by Aysha on
Friday, 28th March 2008 @ 02:20:55 PM AEST
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wow..................................... i love it!
Thank You
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Re: ~ Alone ~
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by shelby on
Friday, 28th March 2008 @ 03:24:40 PM AEST
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Intense and powerful write. I really enjoyed the way it sailed along.
Once in awhile it seemed you were forcing it a bit but we all do that at times.
Great write
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