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Array ( [sid] => 14119 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Tormented Children [time] => 2003-03-11 23:20:00 [hometext] => I wrote breifly after wathching The Ring and almost watching Fear Dot Com.I ran to my folder,and wrote down a bunch of thoughts,and this is the outcome. [bodytext] => A tormented child`s mind,
is a very interesting place.
Filled with tormoil,fear,
dread,and disgrace.
The best thing is,
the lacking of hapiness.
For that there is
no maintaing space.
To hear their cackle,
to hear their cry,
is like
music to my ears,
like
beauty to my eyes.
Their quirt and evil
but mentally insane.
They scream and they shout
for it`s revenge
they wish to gain.
To be set free
is their one true wish,
but to get help,
is a miracle,
waiting for it`s place.
Their main goal
is to cause
torment and woe
beware for every
cheerful soul
is their foe.
Their come out
at night
but do not dwell in
the day.
But don`t worry because
sooner or later
everyone will pay.
HAHAHAHAHAHA
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Tormented Children

Contributed by TenorTaylor09 on Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 11:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

A tormented child`s mind,
is a very interesting place.
Filled with tormoil,fear,
dread,and disgrace.
The best thing is,
the lacking of hapiness.
For that there is
no maintaing space.
To hear their cackle,
to hear their cry,
is like
music to my ears,
like
beauty to my eyes.
Their quirt and evil
but mentally insane.
They scream and they shout
for it`s revenge
they wish to gain.
To be set free
is their one true wish,
but to get help,
is a miracle,
waiting for it`s place.
Their main goal
is to cause
torment and woe
beware for every
cheerful soul
is their foe.
Their come out
at night
but do not dwell in
the day.
But don`t worry because
sooner or later
everyone will pay.
HAHAHAHAHAHA
HAHAHAHAHAHA.

Copyright © TenorTaylor09 ... [ 2003-03-11 23:20:00]
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Re: Tormented Children (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 11:49:31 PM AEST
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Yes So true! Very good,I liked this peice!
Well done! Christina

Re: Tormented Children (User Rating: 1 )
by AVRIL on Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 11:50:29 PM AEST
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HEY THIS IS GOOD... NO ITS GREAT.... NO ITS WONDERFUL... NEWAYS... KEEP WRITING... HOPEFULLY WE CAN FINISH OUR NORMAL? POEM... :)
ALICIA

Re: Tormented Children (User Rating: 1 )
by riverofwords on Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 09:24:46 AM AEST
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good write ..i liked it a lot

peace be your journey

terry

Re: Tormented Children (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 01:33:07 PM AEST
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Taylor,
I too wrote a poem after seeing The Ring...quite a scary thing it is when someones mind has been so distorted...becuase of the hatred of others...great write...keep up the great writing...i cant wait to see what you have next...

Lindsey

Re: Tormented Children (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 08:17:59 PM AEST
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sounds like some people i know....hana

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