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Beauty
Contributed by
tempt_fate
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Tuesday, 25th March 2008 @ 06:29:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Like the gentle breeze on my back
Her beauty is graceful
The feelings that it stirs up
Like the breeze stirring up the leaves
Like a hundred candles lighting the room
Her smile illuminates my mind
Like the room is full of light
My mind is full of her smile
How can it be?
That there is someone that can do this
How can it be?
Her beauty and smile can do this to me
The candle light can be put out,
By the gentle breeze
But yet in me and my mind
Her beauty and smile can never be put out
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Re: Beauty
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by PreciousKitten on
Thursday, 27th March 2008 @ 03:17:08 AM AEST
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| this is way too good not to comment. let me be the first to say, i love this poem. please continue with your writing |
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