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Holding Out
Contributed by
xnoybis
on
Monday, 17th March 2008 @ 02:24:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Standing still
For a moment
Crystal clear
Takes you back
To that one place
Where you can hear
Your dreams are still
buried, but alive
The place where
Time has no pass
And words fall
Like exhausted bullets
from the sky
Before you exhaust yourself
For the last time
Holding out for
The last breath
The last moment
The last time
That you can let everyone else go
And they are gone, finally
And you spread your thoughts like wings
And sail away
A bubble of the thought
That you gave to them
An afterthought
A last cry for
Anyone that cared
They don't
And so you die with them.
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xnoybis
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2008-03-17 02:24:56]
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Re: Holding Out
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by BornReckless on
Tuesday, 18th March 2008 @ 05:31:57 AM AEST
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