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Repentance
Contributed by
yael770
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Tuesday, 11th March 2008 @ 05:42:24 AM in AEST
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As the trees swing there branches
Violently in the roaring wind
Dust and dirt getting in your eyes
Preventing you from being able to see
The path to your house
Just a few steps away
Yet missing it by merely an inch
You stumble on in a daze
Not knowing where you are headed
On an unrecognizable side street
You stray farther and farther
From the places you know
Then as suddenly as it started
The storm gives way
To the rays of the brilliant sunshine
As you see what surrounds you
Clearer than ever before
You follow the footprints
That bring you back home
Copyright ©
yael770
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2008-03-11 05:42:24]
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Re: Repentance
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by FRANCO on
Tuesday, 11th March 2008 @ 12:46:10 PM AEST
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Very imaginative and pictures indeed. I could almost feel the stormy wind and the fear of getting lost...
very elegant my friend...I really liked the presentation.
Wonderfully penned.
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