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Array ( [sid] => 140759 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Friend No More [time] => 2008-03-04 05:49:58 [hometext] => I had either manipulative, pathological liars for friends or push-overs. I grew to be fed up with all the bull***** and separated myself fully from them by getting myself kicked out of school. Now i have myself left to hate for being such a character flaw. [bodytext] => I haven't any friends,
No purpose in life,
Nobody to love,
Please take me up above.

I smile and laugh
But only as an act,
This pains me most of all
And i begin to fall.

I feel everything building,
My shoulders far from stead fast,
I fall heavier now
Leaving good feeling in the past.

I cannot be helped,
My burden is my own,
For I haven't any friends,
I am lost and all alone.

No love I hold for me,
I gave it all to thee,
How foolish can i be
To expect love and sympathy.

I love you for giving me hope,
And hate your broken promises,
I punish myself once more,
For falling for you whom i adore.

Adore I will no more,
Not for you neither me,
For I haven't any friends,
Nor a soul, not anymore. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 229 [topic] => 75 [informant] => Removed [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )
A Friend No More

Contributed by Removed on Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 05:49:58 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished



I haven't any friends,
No purpose in life,
Nobody to love,
Please take me up above.

I smile and laugh
But only as an act,
This pains me most of all
And i begin to fall.

I feel everything building,
My shoulders far from stead fast,
I fall heavier now
Leaving good feeling in the past.

I cannot be helped,
My burden is my own,
For I haven't any friends,
I am lost and all alone.

No love I hold for me,
I gave it all to thee,
How foolish can i be
To expect love and sympathy.

I love you for giving me hope,
And hate your broken promises,
I punish myself once more,
For falling for you whom i adore.

Adore I will no more,
Not for you neither me,
For I haven't any friends,
Nor a soul, not anymore.




Copyright © Removed ... [ 2008-03-04 05:49:58]
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Re: A Friend No More (User Rating: 1 )
by PoeticHybrid on Tuesday, 4th March 2008 @ 10:05:53 AM AEST
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This is a nice poem, simple word choice bringing a powerful message.

Being taken advantage of doesn't prove you have character flaws, it just proves your human. Try not to be so hard on yourself. We are usually our own worst critic.


Re: A Friend No More (User Rating: 1 )
by CAUGHTinAdream on Wednesday, 5th March 2008 @ 11:15:46 AM AEST
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I enjoyed reading this poem. But have faith that things will get better; the storm only lasts for so long.




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