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Array ( [sid] => 140730 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Depths of my mind [time] => 2008-03-02 19:01:42 [hometext] => [bodytext] => As the storm keep on building the lies
trying to break down all that I am
I try to stand with my head held high
hiding the fear that build in my eyes

Waves crashing, licking at my feet
Threatening to sweep me away
in the arms of hate and despair.
Can't do this alone
not good enough

Memories seep through my veins
as the feeling of endlessness carry me away
into the sweet madness
in my mind.
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Depths of my mind

Contributed by SilverRain on Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 07:01:42 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



As the storm keep on building the lies
trying to break down all that I am
I try to stand with my head held high
hiding the fear that build in my eyes

Waves crashing, licking at my feet
Threatening to sweep me away
in the arms of hate and despair.
Can't do this alone
not good enough

Memories seep through my veins
as the feeling of endlessness carry me away
into the sweet madness
in my mind.




Copyright © SilverRain ... [ 2008-03-02 19:01:42]
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Re: Depths of my mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 3rd March 2008 @ 09:32:32 AM AEST
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wow, this is insane.
i can really relate. especially to "as the feeling of endlessness carry me away into the sweet madness in my mind"
I love it.

Hugs
Ravyn


Re: Depths of my mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Oceandreamer on Wednesday, 5th March 2008 @ 09:35:52 AM AEST
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Awesome write!
Intense emotions and movement...
Deep,Dark and "Alive"...
Well expressed.

~~Oceandreamer~~


Re: Depths of my mind (User Rating: 1 )
by alibof10 on Sunday, 23rd March 2008 @ 06:38:16 AM AEST
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outstanding writing


Re: Depths of my mind (User Rating: 1 )
by xxILoveTheSilencexx on Friday, 18th April 2008 @ 06:26:53 AM AEST
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wow very deep and beautiful.....=)
keep up the nice work...




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