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Doesn't Compare
Contributed by
funnyface09
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Wednesday, 27th February 2008 @ 05:53:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I can't believe I am here
Here without you beside me
Still can't believe we are apart
Apart from each other
My heart is aching
Aching to hold you once again
And to embrace you in my arms again
You told me I am lucky
To have someone in my life now
But why my dreams still revolves around you
But why I am missing you like crazy
But why the tears I cried are all for you
The part closest to me
Died when you walked away
Without you, is just not the same
It just doesn't compare
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2008-02-27 17:53:07]
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Re: Doesn't Compare
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th February 2008 @ 09:22:38 AM AEST
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This was filled with sadness and confusion. You still have feelings for him and hold onto a piece of him in your heart. You need to heal and finally let that part go. It is hard believe me I know. This was a well written poem. Hugs
Take care
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