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I just need that soft gentle touch
My moms drivin me crazy
Im gettin lazy
my grade are slippin
My confidence is dippin
My struggle is gettin deeper
it seems like the hill of happiness is gettin steeper
My moms greed for the green is mean
Lose a buck that lady will blow steam
Everytime i breath, Im lied to
I wish hope was something you could be tied to
I need a girl to shine light on me
so i got someone who will fight with me
i need a friend to trust
someone down for me, its a must
my oldest sis is tight
me and her never fight
but shes away married so i dont see her that much
God, i need your touch..... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 142 [topic] => 48 [informant] => ThaMikeMan [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Help, My Souls slippin, I need Touch

Contributed by ThaMikeMan on Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 03:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Dear Lord i dont ask for much
I just need that soft gentle touch
My moms drivin me crazy
Im gettin lazy
my grade are slippin
My confidence is dippin
My struggle is gettin deeper
it seems like the hill of happiness is gettin steeper
My moms greed for the green is mean
Lose a buck that lady will blow steam
Everytime i breath, Im lied to
I wish hope was something you could be tied to
I need a girl to shine light on me
so i got someone who will fight with me
i need a friend to trust
someone down for me, its a must
my oldest sis is tight
me and her never fight
but shes away married so i dont see her that much
God, i need your touch.....

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Re: Help, My Souls slippin, I need Touch (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 04:29:02 AM AEST
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very good expression of your thoughts. venkat

Re: Help, My Souls slippin, I need Touch (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 11:38:15 PM AEST
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Hang in there! Life looks bad now but it will shine later! Keep writing! Christina

Re: Help, My Souls slippin, I need Touch (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 12:52:11 PM AEST
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{{{{{{MIKE}}}}}}}
A nice warm hug.....
for a job well done!
Angel always....Godspeed 0:-)

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