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Purple Sky
Contributed by
RLWildPassions
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Wednesday, 27th February 2008 @ 11:11:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Purple sky, beautiful Youre so beautiful! Yes, that is what he had said. Long before the morning sun came up And before the evening moon appeared He was dead.
Yes, that is what he had said Purple sky, beautiful Youre so beautiful! He did not cry She couldnt cry. Frustrated, depressed Belated birthday cards Envelopes, all undressed
She was blessed! She knew as soon as she greeted that morning sun She was blessed! She knew when she had said goodnight to the moon For she had cried One half Tear Best shed done All those years Less than one
For many nights, and before the risen sun She sat up thinking Really praying for luck Just one half Tear Would that do? Could one half tear do much?
Did she have any? If so, were they locked up in ducts? No, she couldnt sleep She had prayed shed cry She had prayed she could cry
And in her scattered short view she would sigh! But, she knew she had been blessed When that one half tear appeared And, when it fell It was so warm A heavenly morning sun I must tell That one half tear To her, was larger than the ocean
Drawn from her soul, a new emotion But there were many years When shed look up into the sky She felt like one lonely star Far away from the rest
Visibly at best Now and then shed see a small bit of purple And I can still recall How she would shout Icy, blue sky! At times Id hear her cry, Youre Icy, blue sky! Sometimes She had asked me why Hed say, Purple sky, beautiful Youre so beautiful, Each morning, each evening, Youre so beautiful, purple sky!
Her thoughts, did he lie? Purple sky, beautiful Youre so beautiful! And thats what she said, shortly before she was dead
That is what he had said, That is what she had said, Purple sky, beautiful Youre so beautiful! His soul, it is not dead! Her soul, it is not dead!
In my heart I heard what he said His soul, it is not dead In my heart I heard what she said Her soul, it is not dead And to this day Purple sky, beautiful Youre so beautiful! That is what I now say
Yes, that is what I now say Because as I once gazed up into the morning and evening sky I noticed the scattered light had changed And then it had passed through my soul Strongly showing me truths that day And so this is what I now say, Purple sky, beautiful You are so beautiful! He did not lie! She did not lie! Beautiful, youre so beautiful purple sky!
Raquel Leah DuPont Monday, 2008, January 28
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Re: Purple Sky
(User Rating: 1 ) by a7x36 on
Wednesday, 27th February 2008 @ 07:05:33 PM AEST (User
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| interesting and very enjoyable, I like it when poems are deeper than the first read. i took the "one half tear" to represent an ability to properly grieve and accept the passage of a soul from this material world |
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Re: Purple Sky
(User Rating: 1 ) by BornReckless on
Thursday, 28th February 2008 @ 06:31:47 AM AEST (User
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| I agree this is interesting, the form is good and i like how it rhymes every so many lines. Hey that rhymed. |
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